how can i think more maturely ideas for an essay

Question

example,,,,,the essay topic is " what are three important characteristics of good parents",,,,
and i gave three ideas,,Take care of their children a lot, buy them the things they want, and teach them how to do the homework,,
I think theses ideas are very naive because i saw some one wrote other ideas which are,,," resiponsible, be a good idol,,and encourge the children for anything",,,
how to think clearly and in a mature way

Answer 1

你所諗到既"Take care of their children a lot, buy them the things they want, and teach them how to do the homework"~ 3個points 只係歸納為"Take care of their children" 呢1點上面，教小朋友做功課同買野俾佢地只係d好minor既野...

um~ 你可以嘗試下從多方面去分析
good parents 其實好廣泛，對子女好都有好多種
e.g. 可以諗下係環境物質方面(provide good learning environment)，又或者係態度方面(kind？fair？)，又或者係關係方面(close？good communication？)等等
將個範圍諗遠d~再發大黎講~~
一黎唔怕作錯題，二黎唔怕唔夠字嘛

如果有時間可以睇下英文報紙，唔使隻隻字都要識，只係睇下佢d 文章結構，順便學下生字都ok架~ 睇得多諗野都會成熟d~~
思考方式唔係話改就改到，要一步一步黎的
世上無難事~~加油呢^^

Answer 2

其實要寫一篇比較好的essay，有一個重要的因素是：從不同角度去探討
根據你以上所說的三個構思，正如你所講真是非常單一，都只是功能性，而且這些功能性，說真機械人也可以做到。
話說回來，一篇好的論文，要多角度：我們可以從父母的角度看；從小孩子的角度看、從老師的角度看、從社會的角度看、從國家的角度看、從孩子的未來看，和從道德層面看。
舉例說：從父母角度看：正如許多香港的父母所想，就是供給他們所需，提供他們金錢，物質，或好好管教他們的學業，這都是普遍父母的想法；當然，有些父母會想得更廣，所以會想到以身作則，做子女們的榜樣，甚至父母應該使子女有一毎愉快的童年等（當然這點又可以再發揮）。
但小孩子的想法，未必與父母相同：他們可能只想父母花多點時間陪我一起玩，多些抱抱我，多一句的讚賞，給我感受到他們是重視我等等。
單單小孩子與父母的角度也未足夠，因為小孩子成長後，就是社會的支柱，所以社會怎樣看也是非常重要。社會會怎樣期望，父母塑造他們的兒女也是一個重要的原素。如社會所期望父母要使他們的兒女成為一個有公德心的人等等。
有如道德的角度，若父母只使他成為一個非常有才幹的人，但他卻沒有道德；這樣的父母又是否成功的父母
最後，你只要記得多角度，有理據（可做一點的research，如問卷調查，或引用新聞，名人格言等等）




2006-12-05 09:51:39 補充：
，就是一篇好的文章；還有，若你能力足夠的話，最好提供建議方案。

Answer 3

I think what you really mean is how to make your ideas sound more sophisticated, not the ideas. "Being responsible, be a good idol, encourage the children" whatsoever, these are just compressed words that you can use instead of "take care of their children a lot, buy them things they want" whatever. Unlike yours, those words that they used are for further expansion.

As for parents being responsible, they should take care of their children a lot.
As for parents being overindulged, they should give the children things they want.
As for parents being responsible, they should teach the children how to do the homework.

You just need to find that one word that includes what you want to say, not the ideas that count. Don't worry about your ideas, it's all good.

Using your example "what are the three important characteristics of good parents", in the thesis, you should use words that can help you expand your essay. "Take care of the children a lot" should be in the body paragraphs, not the thesis. Get your three points compressed in the thesis.

Answer 4

l saw u r writing in english, so l think it will be better to answer u in english(if u dont understad , tell me, l write in chinese)

if u really want to find the subject arounf the essay topic,
weather which topic is it,
for example ,your topic,there are many way to do it
the normal way is below:
1)rescarch,
the normally best way for essay to reaseach is look at the old news paper and recording,internet resarch and record the main point , use the book to reseach,
find some famuse people , that you learn about them about this topic, questionnaire if use your example l may find my parent or sum arent you know and ask them what they think ,,,but remember ,dont copy and paste,because normal essey is record on how your own view ,point, and your understandment,if u copy and paste everything, she may give u a very good make, but it is not going to be your real mark because you actually learn nothing,even people think you learn lot.
2)draw a spider diagram,
for your example,l will write the topic down,and then i may find in the main point of resach ,for example is it got more succesued case in rich or poor famile, normally how people famile going,
3)soultion,
put down the final u think, "what are three important characteristics of good parents",
find the most important point and find sumthing to suppor it, if u say l think it is important to got more spared time, u may say "after my reseach and my idea,l find out it is important to got more time spend with kid as a parent ,XXXXXXXX is the case of a sussed idea ,"....(what XXXXXXXX said for his succes ...")
and second l think.,,
kepp going on like that .....


hop l help u ~
if u dont understand the english, u can tell me, l can tell u to in the chinese

2006-12-06 02:15:37 補充：
hah tse,that what l say,,,,,dont copy plz