請English speaker幫忙檢閱~~自我介紹^^

Question

請熟稔英語的朋友幫我看一下自我介紹
不是面試用的!
我參考了先前知識上各位朋友們提供
的句型與舉例擬了以下~~
若希望能再活潑一些的話應該在哪邊
做些語氣上的轉折或補充加強??
另外想請問
"需要介紹父母親的職業嗎?"
1.
Good morning, nice to meet you here.
It's my pleasure to introduce myself to all of you.
2.
My name is Diana Chen and I was born on
May, 31st, 1989.
Currently, I am studying in third grade at
xx senoir high school.
3.
There are 4 members in my family. They are my parents, older brother and me.
4.
Speaking of my interests, I love seeing movies, and I think xxx is the best movie I have ever seen.(我只說我愛看電影一件事interest要加s嗎??)
(and 前面要加逗號嗎??)
5.
During my leisure time, I enjoy watching TV programs. Having my favorite fried chiken while watching my favorite series is the most enjoyable thing to me.
(favorite用了二次有別的字可替換嗎?)
6.
When it comes to my personalities, I am very outgoing, optimistic and easy to
get along with people, just exactly like my horoscope, _XXX_.

請問自我介紹還"應該"介紹些什麼?
請您不吝指教謝謝^^

7.
I've been studying English for five and a half years, I would like to sharpen my English skill in order to travel all over the world and experience the different custom and culture.

Answer 1

有個小疑問 這是要跟誰說的呢 好像nice to meet you 在對象使用要注意一點 總覺得感覺怪怪的???

Answer 2

1. Good morning, nice to meet everyone here. It's my pleasure to introduce myself to all of you.2. My name is Diana Chen and I was born on May, 31st, 1989.Currently, I am a senior in  xx high school.3. There are  four family members in my family ,my parents, my older brother and me.4. My favorite hobby is watch movies.  I love go to movies, and I think xxx is the best movie I have ever seen. I enjoy watching TV programs at my leisure time. I enjoy to eat my favorite fried chiken while watching my favorite series.6. I am very outgoing, optimistic and easy going person, just exactly like my horoscope, _XXX_.7.  I've been studying English for five and a half years. I want to sharpen my English language skill ,so I can travel around the world and to experience the different customs and cultures.