可否幫忙訂正英文翻譯是否正確?Thanks.

Question

像大多數夫妻一樣，住在郊區的史密斯夫婦，生活安逸卻平淡。
Be like most couple, live in Smith's couple of the suburban area, live at
ease but mild.

長久以來相互隱埋身分的兩人，其實是當今最頂尖的殺手。
The Yin covers up two people of the status mutually for long time, is the
most top cutthroat in fact nowadays.

某日他們接獲新任務，必須幹掉競爭公司的王牌，他們沒有料到，傳說中的殺手居然
是自己的枕邊人。
Certain day they receive new mission, have to polish off trump card of
competing the company, they didn't expect, the legendary cutthroat was
incredibly own bed side person.

史密斯夫婦決定拿錢辦事，順便考驗一下伴侶的能耐。
Smith's couple decide taking money handles affairs, testing the ability
of the companion conveniently.

史密斯夫婦的婚姻生活因為充滿了秘密、謊言和倦怠，顯得烏雲密佈。
The marital life of Smith's couple seems to be dark cloud to spread densely because of
being filled with the secret, lies and ennui.

他們的居家生活非常無聊，這段關係奄奄一息。
Their daily life at home is very boring, this relation is on the brink of death.


他們有最好的物質生活，家卻只是個空殼，沒有心也沒有靈魂。這只是房子，不是個家。
They have the best physical life, but the house be just empty hull, have no heart also have no soul.
This is just house, is not a house.

雖然他們彼此深愛對方，但他們特殊職業和所身處的環境，讓他們不能貼近感受彼此，正所謂相愛容易相處難。
Although they love deeply each other, their special occupation and the
environment of the body, can't let them come close to feel each other,
just so-called love each other to get along with easily difficult.

Answer 1

像大多數夫妻一樣，住在郊區的史密斯夫婦，生活安逸卻平淡。
Like most of couples, Mr. Smith and Mrs. Smith live in a suburban area, and thier livelihood is peaceful and uninteresting.

長久以來相互隱埋身分的兩人，其實是當今最頂尖的殺手。
The couple conceal their real identity for a ong time. Today, they are the top killers indeed.

某日他們接獲新任務，必須幹掉競爭公司的王牌，他們沒有料到，傳說中的殺手居然是自己的枕邊人。One day they had another mission, they needed to kill the trump card of the competitive company. They did not think that the killer of hearsay was the people on the other side of the bed.

史密斯夫婦決定拿錢辦事，順便考驗一下伴侶的能耐。
The couple decided to accept this mission, and tested the capacity of each other in passing.

史密斯夫婦的婚姻生活因為充滿了秘密、謊言和倦怠，顯得烏雲密佈。
Their marriage had so many secrets, lies, and weary. Therefore, the marriage became just like black clouds gathered overhead.

他們的居家生活非常無聊，這段關係奄奄一息。
Their livelihood was very boring, so this relation was on the brink of death.



P.S 因為在第一句我已提過(史密斯夫婦)了, 所以接下來的就不必在重複翻(史密斯夫婦), 以免太過累綴


他們有最好的物質生活，家卻只是個空殼，沒有心也沒有靈魂。這只是房子，不是個家。
They have the best physical life, but the house be just empty hull, have no heart also have no soul.
This is just house, is not a house.

雖然他們彼此深愛對方，但他們特殊職業和所身處的環境，讓他們不能貼近感受彼此，正所謂相愛容易相處難。
Although they love deeply each other, their special occupation and the
environment of the body, can't let them come close to feel each other,
just so-called love each other to get along with easily difficult.

2006-11-28 06:31:01 補充：
They had the best physical life, but the house just only an empty shell without heart and soul. This was just a house, not a home.

2006-11-28 06:31:25 補充：
Although they loved each other deeply. They could not open their heart and close to each other because their special occupation and circumstance. That's called "fall in love is very easily, but get along with each other is very difficult"

Answer 2

像大多數夫妻一樣，住在郊區的史密斯夫婦，生活安逸卻平淡。The Smiths couple are like most ordinary couples who live in the  suburban area and live an ordinary and lifeless marriage.長久以來相互隱埋身分的兩人，其實是當今最頂尖的殺手。They both are world's most deadly assassins, but they kept thier true identities secret for all these time.  某日他們接獲新任務，必須幹掉競爭公司的王牌，他們沒有料到，傳說中的殺手居然是自己的枕邊人。One day both received a new mission. The assignment is to assassin the legendary assassins of the competing organization. They didn't expect to find out that their target legendary assassins are their beloved half .史密斯夫婦決定拿錢辦事，順便考驗一下伴侶的能耐。The Smiths couple accept the assginment and try to test the ability of their partner. 史密斯夫婦的婚姻生活因為充滿了秘密、謊言和倦怠，顯得烏雲密佈。The marriage of Mr. and Mrs. Smiths is filled with secrets, lies and darkness.他們的居家生活非常無聊，這段關係奄奄一息。Their lifeless lives made the couple's relationship unalive. 他們有最好的物質生活，家卻只是個空殼，沒有心也沒有靈魂。這只是房子，不是個家。They have all the materialistic life in an empty hearted house. There is no soul, but only a hard shell house. It's not a home. 雖然他們彼此深愛對方，但他們特殊職業和所身處的環境，讓他們不能貼近感受彼此，正所謂相愛容易相處難。They are traped by their true identity and occupation. Even though they both very much in love with each other, it's difficult for them to open up and share their true feeling for each other. It's easier to be in love than being true together.  

2006-11-28 08:55:56 補充：
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