My Autobiography
I am a senior high school student. I live in Long Ten. My habits are playing basketball and volleyball. I am an activity girl. I feel my life that is filled with love and warm. I faced my in hope and light.
My saying is “Every cloud has a silver line.” My math subject is poor, but I never give up it.
I like to help people who were down.
I have a happiness family .I love them.
I feel happy all day with family and friends.
2006-11-26 12:26:45 · 4 個解答 · 發問者 kitty 2 in 社會與文化 ➔ 語言
I faced my in hope and light. =>我用希望與光明面對我ㄉ生活
2006-11-26 13:05:08 · update #1
I faced my in hope and light. =>少加到life
2006-11-26 13:08:46 · update #2
I have a happiness family .=>不是happy是幸福！！
真ㄉ很感謝你們＾＾．．．．．雖然只能選擇一個
好人會有好報ㄉ唷！！
2006-11-26 13:13:27 · update #3
My AutobiographyI am a senior high school student. I live in Long Ten. My hobbies are playing basketball and volleyball. I am an activity girl. My life is filled with love and warmth. I am enthusiastic with positive attitude live my life. I believe“Every cloud has a silver line.” My math subject is poor, but I never give it up.I like to help people at their downtimes.I have a happy family .I love them.I feel grateful each day being with family and friends.
2006-11-26 13:03:08 · answer #1 · answered by gs71099 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I am an activity girl. 是指妳是喜歡從事戶外活動的女孩嗎？ 如果是這樣的話可以用 I am a outdoor girl.
I feel my life is filled with love and warmth. warm是形容詞，要改成名詞，that可以省略，比較通順
I face my life with a positive attitude. (我以正面的態度面對人生，不知道這樣合不合妳的意思)用光明面直翻成英文很奇怪，有時候寫英文不能用中文去想英文，可能根本沒人這樣用，face 要用現在式，不是過去式
Every cloud has a silver lining, 不是line
I'm not good at math我不擅長數學，這樣比 my math subject is poor 通順
I'll never give it up 加上will表示妳永不放棄，give up如果受詞是代名詞像是it, them等等, 要放中間
I like to help people when they are down 比較好
happiness是名詞，不能做形容詞，改成 happy
整個文章重新改寫如下:
I am a senior high school student and live in Long Ten. My habits are playing basketball and volleyball. I am a outdoor girl. I fell my life is filled with love and warmth, so I face my live with a positive attitude. My saying is " Every cloud has a silver lining"
I am not good at math, but I'll never give it up. I love to help people when they are down. I have a happy family and I love them. I feel happy all the time with my family and friends.
妳能把妳想表達的用中文先說，我再幫妳修飾一下，才會比較通順，合乎妳的原意。希望能幫到妳!
另外句子和句子間能合成一句比較好，不然每句開頭都一直是I 也不順，try to make every sentence longer.
2006-11-29 22:35:19 · answer #2 · answered by ? 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I am a senior high school student. I live in Long Ten. My habits are playing basketball and volleyball. I am a girl who likes activity. I feel my life that is filled with love and warmth. I face myself in hope and light.
My favorite saying is “Every cloud has a silver line.” My math is poor, but I never give it up.
I like to help people who are down.
I have a happy family. I love them.
I feel happy all day with family and friends.
2006-11-26 12:37:50 · answer #3 · answered by kevinaqua 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I am an activity girl改成 active (活潑的)
I faced my in hope and light. 這句話中文是啥可以跟我講一下嗎
My math subject is poor, but I never give up it. subjec可以省略 give up it要寫成give it up
I like to help people who were down 應該要寫成I like to help people who are in need.
I have a happiness family happines應該要改成happy
I feel happy all day with family and friends 應該再familt前加一個my會比較好
2006-11-26 19:11:14 補充：
我用希望與光明面對我ㄉ生活 I live in the bright sidehappy可以當幸福的My saying 是要說我的座右銘嗎可以寫成The motto I live by is.........
2006-11-26 12:37:42 · answer #4 · answered by 小婷 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋