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Question

Buri Al Arab Hotel, designed to resemble a billowing sail, is one of the most spectacular and incomparably luxurious hotels in the world. The hotel soars to a height of 321 meters, dominating the Dubai coastline. The building’s external lighting scheme can vary from white to multicolored, changing every thirty minutes.
Stepping inside the lobby, you will see the lobby is breathtaking the suites are as luxurious as you can dream of. The lobby is sumptuously carpeted in a rich combination of orange, red, yellow, white and blue. On either side of the whole area are the eye-catching gold shell desks of the concierge and guess service staff, while the whole area is illuminated by intricate crystal chandelier. As you walk into the hotel, front of you is a volcano and its wall of water combined with flames, has never been seen in the region. Volcano is centre stage for marvelous displays, as water cascades down the fountain’s steeped side and tall choreographed bursts of water shoot skywards. The water theme continues inside the lobby, with a terraced cascade of water and light. Water and mist flow down through steps filled with elegantly colored glass stones and leaping arches of water, producing amazing choreographed movements and sparks of water, colorful and light. The escalators are at the side of the water pool. If you take the escalator up to the top of the building and look up, you can see the top of the hotel. This is the view from behind the sail like structure which at night has changing colored lights shinning on top of the building. A parade of leather-backed sofas with checked velvet cushions and striped silk bolsters marches across the multicolored curlicues of the carpet are in the front of the water theme, which make the lobby seems fashionable. On the opposite side of the stage, which black, tall desk above with computers, papers, telephones, room keys, and mini-microphones ordered on table.

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Answer 1

Buri Al Arab Hotel, designed to resemble a billowing sail, is one of the most spectacular and incomparably luxurious hotels in the world. The hotel soars to a height of 321 meters, dominating the Dubai coastline. The building's external lighting scheme can vary from white to multicolored, changing every thirty minutes. Roaming inside the lobby, you will see the lobby is breathtaking the suites are as luxurious as those you can dream of. The lobby is sumptuously carpeted in a rich combination of orange, red, yellow, white and blue. On either side of the whole area are the eye-catching gold-shelled desks of the concierge and guest service staff, while the whole area is illuminated by intricate crystal chandeliers. As you walk into the hotel, what lies in front of you is a volcano with its wall of water combined with flames, which has never been seen in the region. The volcano is centre-staged for marvelous displays, as water cascades down the fountain's steeped sides and tall choreographed bursts of water shoot skyward. The water theme continues inside the lobby, with a terraced cascade of water and light. Water and mists flow down through the steps decorated with elegantly colored glass stones and leaping arches of water, producing amazing choreographed movements and sparks of water, colorful and bright. The escalators are beside the water pool. If you Take one of them up to the top of the building and look up, and you can see the roof of the hotel. This is the view from behind the sail-like structure, which at night has lights of changinf colors shinning on top of the building. A parade of leather-backed sofas with checked velvet cushions and striped silk bolsters marching across the multicolored curlicues of the carpet is in the front of the water theme, which seems to make the lobby fashionable. On the opposite side of the stage, which is black, are tall desks with computers, papers, telephones, room keys, and mini-microphones in ordered arrays on them.