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Question

拜託幫我看看哪些地方要改或是可以寫更好,感激不盡~~

We will provide parts of traveling expenses to you.
The payment needs your passport photocopy.
Would you please provide the scanned file to us?

We will make the arrangement of transportation service from the airport to conference venue. Please turn on your cell phone after arriving Taipei International Airport so that the airport transporter can connect with you. He will take a board which write your name at the Arrival Hall.

Finally, please confirm and provide the information as bellow:
1.Entry Date: Dec. 9th (Sat.) OSAKA 13:15 ---> TAIPEI 15:20 EG217 Dec.
Exit Date: 12th (Tue.) TAIPEI 16:40 ---> OSAKA 20:00 EG212
2.Your mobel phone number: ___________________

Answer 1

妳寫的已經不錯了,本人稍作修正,請參考
We will provide parts of traveling expenses for you and the payment needs your passport photocopy, please kindly provide to us.
We will make the arrangement of transportation service from the TaoUan airport to conference venue, the airport transporter will connect with you after your arrival, so please turn on your cell phone , he will take a board writing your name at the Arrival Hall.

Please confirm the information as bellow:
Entry Date: Dec. 9th (Sat.) OSA 13:15 ---> TAI 15:20 EG217 Dec.
Exit Date: 12th (Tue.) TAI 16:40 ---> OSA 20:00 EG212
And please tell me your mobel phone number as well, thank you very much and wish you will have nice trip in Taiwan.

Answer 2

We will reimburse  partial of your traveling expenses.The reimbursement needs  a photocopy of your passport .Please send us the scanned file of your passport?We will make the arrangement of transportation service for you from the airport to conference venue. Please turn on your cell phone after arriving Taipei International Airport in order for our airport transporter to reach you. He will raise a board with your name at the Arrival Hall. Please look for you name as soon as you exit.Finally, please confirm the following information:1.Arrival Date: Dec. 9th (Sat.) OSAKA 13:15 ---> TAIPEI 15:20 EG217 Dec. Departure Date: 12th (Tue.) TAIPEI 16:40 ---> OSAKA 20:00 EG2122.Your cell phone number: ___________________

Answer 3

We will be providing you with some of your travelling expenses for which we will need a photocopy of your passport. Would you be able to provide us with a scanned image file?

We will also be arranging transportation from the airport to the conference venue so we ask that you please turn on your mobile phone after arriving at Taipei International Airport so that the person meeting you will be able to contact you. Please note that he will be waiting in the arrivals hall holding a board with your name written on it.

Finally, please confirm the information below:

1. Entry Date: Dec. 9th (Sat.) OSAKA 13:15 ---> TAIPEI 15:20 EG217 Dec.
Exit Date: 12th (Tue.) TAIPEI 16:40 ---> OSAKA 20:00 EG212

2. Your mobile phone number: ___________________.