改英文.中翻英(怎麼改會更好)

Question

抱歉~因為英文不好所以翻的很糟~
可以幫我改一下嗎(希望不要用太難的單字)~謝謝^^

A：A lot of questions are not only a best answer，sometimes don’t concentrated on question’s correct answer ,and you were discover more and more interesting answer，and then no matter what learning anything not just study also make flexible use of your learning，if you can make flexible use of your learning
，you were learning well than just study.
A中文..有很多問題都不是只有一個最好的答案而已.有時候不要太專注於問題的正解.你就會發現更多有趣的答案.還有不論學什麼都不要只會死背而已.要懂得活用.這樣一來效果一定會更好.

A：If we have such a doctor around us，I think everyone can’t afraid to see the docter
everyone will be happy to see the docter，in addition inpatient also be happy to stay in hospital，and don’t afraid the worsening of inpatient illness because they will going to hospital as soon as get ill.
A中文..如果真的有這樣的醫生的話.我想就沒人會怕看醫生了.好像連去醫院看病都會是一件有趣的事呢.而住院的病患也不會因擔心病情.而繼續惡化下去.所以大家都會主動去看病.讓自己趕快好起來.

Answer 1

有很多問題都不是只有一個最好的答案而已.Sometimes there are more than just an optimal answer to a lot of questions.有時候不要太專注於問題的正解.你就會發現更多有趣的答案.When you aren't too focusing on finding the one and only solution, more interesting answers come along.還有不論學什麼都不要只會死背而已.要懂得活用.這樣一來效果一定會更好.Besides, use your knowledge wisely rather than just memorize it, and you will get better results.如果真的有這樣的醫生的話.我想就沒人會怕看醫生了.好像連去醫院看病都會是一件有趣的事呢.If we had such a doctor, no one would be afraid of seeing a doctor anymore, and it would even be fun to go to hospital.而住院的病患也不會因擔心病情.而繼續惡化下去.And patients in the hospital would not get worse because of worrying about their conditions.所以大家都會主動去看病.讓自己趕快好起來. Then people would go to the doctors unforcedly to get better early.*整段為假設語氣, 故用過去式.

Answer 2

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A中文..有很多問題都不是只有一個最好的答案而已.有時候不要太專注於問題的正解.你就會發現更多有趣的答案.還有不論學什麼都不要只會死背而已.要懂得活用.這樣一來效果一定會更好.

A Chinese . . When there is such a doctor. Perhaps, I think that nobody can have examined (It is) ..food... Peeling off, going to Ya academy, and even examining it can be one interesting thing (It is) ..food.. and. Having been hospitalized is not coming (It is) ..food.. to the illness ..the purpose is to worry about the condition even if it gets sick... It deteriorates continuously and it descends. Therefore, it goes so that both of everyone may voluntarily examine it. I am made to be able to stand up early.
A中文..如果真的有這樣的醫生的話.我想就沒人會怕看醫生了.好像連去醫院看病都會是一件有趣的事呢.而住院的病患也不會因擔心病情.而繼續惡化下去.所以大家都會主動去看病.讓自己趕快好起來.


我翻是這樣子~~ 可以嗎??