看一下英文作文的文法(PartC)

Question

My assignment topic is to write an letter to my daughter who invites my to atted her same-sex marriage, and i as a (Roman) Catholic respond the reasons why i will not attend her wedding.
here it is:

The third reason is that not only, as I mentioned before, homosexual unions cannot meet the function of procreation and that of continuing human race in the aspect of biological, also homosexual marriage will result in disorder in society. Even though gay or lesbian can adopt children, however, it will cause many problems as they grow up, having no full human development.. And this act is considered to be violence to children. Furthermore, even though there is an advanced bio-technology to produce human being, such artificial reproduction is still been considered to be disrespect to human dignity. In order to have health children, I oppose to attend to your wedding and to adopt children.
For above reasons, I hope you to reconsider your decision. However, if you insists on getting marriage with your same-sex companion, I respect your decision in your decision of sexual intendancy, but I will not attend your wedding ceremony.

Answer 1

I'm too tired to proofread it right now, but I'll be back to help later.

2006-11-23 22:09:17 補充：
Can't say I agree with the subject matter though. But without a doubt you did a good job on this letter !!!The third reason is not only, as I mentioned before, that homosexual unions cannot meet the function of procreation and the biological continuation of the human race, but also that homosexual marriage will result in social disorder. Although homosexuals can adopt children, it will cause many problems as they grow up; having no full human development. This act is considered violent to children. Furthermore, even though there is an advanced bio-technological process to produce human beings, such artificial reproduction is still considered disrespectful to human dignity. For the sake of your potential children, I oppose to attend your wedding and I am against you to adopt children.For above reasons (or for the reasons I mentioned above), I hope you to reconsider your decision. However, if you insist on getting married to her, I will respect your decision, but not attend your wedding ceremony.

Answer 2

My assignment is to write a letter to my daughter. She has invited me to attend her same-sex marriage, and I as a Catholic will respond with the reasons why I will not attend her wedding.

Here it is:

The third reason is that not only, as I mentioned before, homosexual unions cannot meet the function of procreation and that of continuing the human race in the biological aspect, but also homosexual marriage will result in the disorder of the society. Even though a gay or lesbian may adopt children, having no full human development many problems will arise as they grow up. This act may be considered as violence on the children. Furthermore, even though there are advanced biotechnology to produce human beings, such artificial reproductions are still considered to be disrespectful to the human dignity. In order to have healthy children, I refuse to attend to your wedding and oppose of you to adopt children.

For above reasons, I hope you will reconsider your decision. However, if you insists on getting married with your same-sex companion, I will respect your sexual tendency, but not attend your wedding ceremony.


都幫你改在裡面了，自己看看吧
有一句你說對小孩的暴力那邊，我看不是很懂為什麼那會被認為是暴力
還有最後一段，沒有intendancy這個字，我自己幫你填上別的了^^