看一下英文作文的文法(PartA)

Question

My assignment topic is to write an letter to my daughter who invites my to atted her same-sex marriage, and i as a (Roman) Catholic respond the reasons why i will not attend her wedding.
here it is:

Dear Daughter,
I’m glad that you invite me to your wedding. However, I'm not going to attend your wedding since that as a Catholic believer and practitioner, same-sex marriage and homosexuality are opposed. There are few main reasons for my opposition, which I'll discuss them in the rest of the letter.
The first reason for refusing attending your same-sex marriage is that we as Romans Catholic believer have little doubt that the chief function of sax is to procreate. Therefore, it is considered to be "unnatural" if the purpose of procreation is excluded, as we are saying here is homosexuality. In God’s plan, he has commanded that “the sacred power and privilege of sexual relations be exercised only between a man and woman who are legally married” (Jesus Christ). In other words, the marriage can only be formed by one man and woman since that they are "mutually perfect to each other” (Doctrine) In short, the purpose of marriage and sexuality in God's plan is to practice of procreation and upbringing of new human lives" (doctrine). Since your marriage does not meet both needs, and therefore, it is not a tradition marriage, and I’ll never accept it. Moreover, it is not appropriate to have sex for "personal private pleasure and satisfaction with aspects of exploitation and degradation"(Gomes), since that this kind of sexual pleasure is being considered to be pagan sex, not Christian sex. Since that homosexuality and same-sex marriage have not general accepted by the entire Christian world, I’ll not attend your wedding.

Answer 1

你的題目也有文法錯誤，我在part c有回答過了

Dear Daughter,
I’m glad that you have invited me to your wedding, however, I'm not going to attend your wedding. As a Catholic and a practitioner of the Catholic belief, I have to oppose same-sex marriage and homosexuality. There are a few reasons for my opposition, which I'll discuss in the rest of the letter.

The first reason for refusing to attend your same-sex marriage, is that we as Romans Catholics have little doubt that the chief function of sex is to procreate. Therefore, it is considered to be "unnatural" if the purpose of procreation is excluded, as is homosexuality. In God’s plan, He has commanded that “the sacred power and privilege of sexual relations be exercised only between a man and woman who are legally married” (Jesus Christ). In other words, a marriage can only be formed by one man and one woman, because they are "mutually perfect to each other” (Doctrine). In short, the purpose of marriage and sexuality in God's plan is "to practice procreation and upbringing of new human lives" (Doctrine). Since your marriage does not meet both purposes, it is not a traditional marriage, and I’ll never accept it. Moreover, it is not appropriate to have sex for "personal private pleasure and satisfaction with aspects of exploitation and degradation"(Gomes), since that this kind of sexual pleasure is considered to be pagan sex, not Christian sex. Since homosexuality and same-sex marriage have not been generally accepted by the entire Christian world, I’ll not attend your wedding.

Answer 2

學任何語言不外乎就是要有恆心跟毅力

我覺得白天有工作的上班族特別適合線上學習英文

才不用下了班就急急忙忙趕著去補習班上課

光來回車程就省了1~2個小時，省下的時間可以多背好幾個單字

也可以輕鬆在家線上學英文，想學好英文的人這是一個很不錯的機會~

用正確的方法一次把英文學起來!!


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