求助英文達人，英文短文檢查錯誤

Question

這是用一至二分鐘回答的問答，我用很爛的英文寫好了，
請英文達人幫忙改錯，文法方面可能亂七八糟，請不要恥笑我
好心的人可以幫我加油添醋，但單字請簡單一點不然我背不起來，謝謝
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What should you do when you feel very sad?
我很幸運擁有目前的一切，我也很少有覺得非常悲傷的時刻，
我想，如果我覺得心情不好，我會先大哭一場，直到感覺心情比較好，
然後我會面對問題並設法解決，
假設問題是來自我無法同時兼顧家庭.學業和工作，
在家庭我會珍惜能夠和家人相聚的時間，
在學業上會減少我的修習的學分，
在工作上我會和老闆討論我的問題，例如降低工作時數直到畢業
我相信只有面對問題，還有解決問題，才有可能讓心情變好

I am very lucky to have what I have，and I seldom to feel very sad.
I think when I feel sad, I will cry first till to feel better,than I will face the problem and try to solve it.
For example ,If the problem is I can not take care family,school and work at same time,
In family, I will to treasure the time when gathers with my family ,
In school, I will reduce the subject
In work, I will discuss my problem with my boss, maybe reduce woke time until I graduate from master.
I believe only face the problem,and solve it , and than could be feel better.

Answer 1

I am very lucky to have what I have, and seldom feel sad.
But when I do feel sad, I would first cry to make myself feel better, then I will face and try to solve the problem.
If the problem has to do with not being about to take good care of my family, my schoolwork, and my job at the same time, I will do the following:
I will treasure the times spent with my family.
I will decrease the number of credits I'm taking in school.
Then I will talk to my boss, about maybe decreasing the workload until I graduate.
I believe only by facing and solving the problems will I feel better.

Answer 2

I am lucky to have what I have and I seldom feel sad.
When I am feeling down (sad), I will cry my heart out till I feel better. Then I'll face the problem and tried to solve it.
For example, if I am unable to cope with family life, work and studies, I will treasure the time with my family.
I may score less marks for my studies. I can discuss my problems with my boss at work to reduce workload until end of studies.
I believe that by facing the problem directly and solving it head-on, I will feel better about it.

Answer 3

I think I'm very lucky to have everything I have right now. I don't really feel very sad that often.
I think when I feel sad, I will cry out loud until I feel better, and then I will face and try to solve the problem.
For example, if the problem is not being able to take care of my family, my education, and my work at the same time,
I'll try to cherish the time I spend with my family,
I'll take less courses in the school,
and I'll talk to my boss about my problem to see if I can reduce some work time until I graduate from the school.
I believe that only facing and solving the problems can actually make me feel better.