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In the cinema,Mary was so low that I did not buy a ticket to her.I also bought some snack with her.She said that she never eat this delicious food.What food did I buy to Mary?I bought fish balls,dumplings,almost chinese food.Mary asked me where I bought the chinese food.I told her I bought them in cinema snack bar.We ate the food and enjoyed the film.

Answer 1

幸好，我是香港人，所以也能估到你的意思，盼望沒有估錯。

I needed not buy a ticket for Mary because her height was under the mark. In the cinema, I bought some snacks to her. she said she had never eaten such delicious foods. What kinds of food did I buy to her? they were fish balls, dumplings and almost all chinese foods there. Mary asked me where I bought those foods, I told her they were bought in the cinema snack bar. We enjoyed both the foods and the film.

Answer 2

Mary was very disappointed that I did not buy a ticket for her at the cinema. I made it up by buying some snacks for her. She said that she never eat such delicious food before. What food did I buy for Mary? I bought fish balls, dumplings – all Chinese food. Mary asked where I bought them and I told her that they were from the cinema snack bar. We then happily ate the food and enjoyed the film.

so low = 好 down = not the right way to write it.

buy a ticket ___ her = for her, not to her

2006-11-02 16:07:10 補充：
so low = 好 down = not the right way to write it.You can use:1. was disappointed2. was upset3. was devastated (好严重吓)4. was unhappy

Answer 3

Mary was so upset with me for not buying her ticket in the cinema. However, I bought some snacks for her. She said she had never eaten such delicious food before. You may wonder what snacks did I actually get for Mary? I bought fish balls, dumplings, mainly Chinese foods. She also asked me where I purphased the snacks adn I told her it was from the cinema snack bar. Together, we enjoyed both the snacks and the film.