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Question

my specializing is special education. So I really like children even they are mental retard or some problems of their physical. I think children are angles,
Of course I know if just like children is not enough to be a teacher.

After I came back , I was a substitute teacher in long gane elementary school

For two months, than I found to be a teacher is really nice, because students like to get alone with me and share their secret to me. During those days I feel very happy everyday

But I think my abilities is not enough to be a good English teacher, so I attend teacher training workshops of giraffe, I got many information from there, such like how to teach children in English, and classroom management, and teaching skills and methods, and how to communicate with kids and their parents , so after that I guess I already increase my self confidence of teaching skills, but I still need more time to add my experiences.

Answer 1

I was specializing in special education. I really like children even though they are mental retard or have some physical problems, I still think children are angles.
Of course I know I can’t be a teacher if I just like the children.
After I came back from (where?), I was a substitute teacher in long gane ( Is that 長庚？)elementary school for two months.
During those days in 長庚, I found myself suitable in being a teacher, because students like to get alone with me and share their secrets with me. I felt very happy everyday

However, I think I am still not enough for being a good English teacher. Thus, I attended teacher training workshops of giraffe where I got a plenty of information, such as teaching children in English, managing classrooms, teaching skills and methods and communicating with kids and their parents as well. After attending the training program, I guess I have increased self-confidence in teaching, yet I still need more time to gain more experiences.


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Answer 2

mental retard 應該是mentally retarded

Answer 3

I SPECIALZE IN special education, AND I really like children even they are MENTALLY retard or HAVE some problems WITH their BODIES. I think children are angles.

Of course I know JUST TO like children is not enough to be a teacher.

Since I came back , I HAD BEEN a substitute teacher in Long Gane(?) elementary school for two months, THEN I found to be a teacher WAS really nice, because students GOT ALONG QUITE WELL and LIKED TO share their SECRETS WITH me. During those days I FELT very happy everyday.

But I THOUGHT my abilitiesWAS not GOOD enough to be a English teacher, so I ATTENDED teacher training workshops AT Giraffe, AND I got many information from there, SUCH AS how to teach children in English, classroom management, teaching skills and methods, and how to communicate with kids and their parents. After that I guess I have inceased confidence IN MYSELF ON teaching skills, but I still need more time to ACCUMULATE my experiences.