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Question

Dear John:
How have you been? I haven’t to see you for a long time. Do you miss me? How about your mother? Is she ok? You should be serious about taking care of your mother. I wish your mother a speedy recovery. I am writing this letter to you because I want to discuss our marriage. I will not be ready to get married to you. So you must have to wait for me for two years. Now I am a student. I want to learn a lot and make a lot of friends. I will be more mature in two years. Then, I will finish school.
After graduation I want to look for a job. To get married you need lots of money. If we haven’t any money we can’t get married. So, I must earn money for our marriage and home. Although I have finished a lot of things before married, If only you love me you don’t care about this. You can look for a job and then take a trip in two years because two years has gone so fast. You also can take care of your mother at this time.
Please excuse me. I can’t be always beside you. If you miss me, you can write letter or makes phone call to me. We have to keep in contact until our married.
Hope you can be happy all the time.
Marcia

Answer 1

Dear John:
How have you been? I haven’t to seen you for a long time. Did you miss me? How's your mother? Is she ok? You should be serious about taking care of her. I wish your mother can recover very soon. I wrote this letter to you because I want to discuss about our marriage. I'm not ready to marry you. So you must wait two years for me. I am a student now, I want to learn a lot and make a lot of friends. I will be more mature after two years. Then, I will finish school.
After graduation I want to look for a job. Getting married needs a lot of money. We won't be happy if we don't have enough money . So, I must earn money for our marriage and home. Although I have finished a lot of things before married,[ If only you love me you don’t care about this]這句話意思不太懂. You can look for a job and then take a trip for two years because two years wil pass really fast. You can also take care of your mother during these days.
Please forgive me. I can’t always stay with you. If you miss me, you can write letter or make a phone call to me. We have to keep in touch until we're married.
Hope you can be happy all the time.
Marcia

Answer 2

Dear John:How have you been? I haven’t seen you for a long time. Do you miss me? How is your mother? Is she ok? You should be serious about taking care of your mother. I wish your mother a soon recovery. I am writing(write to you本身就有寫信給你的意思, 所以後面不需再寫this letter) to discuss with you about our wedding. I am not ready to marry you yet. So you must (must和have to 的意思一樣, 不可重複)wait for me for another two years. Now I am still a student, I want to learn a lot more and make a lot more of friends. Also, I will be more mature after two years. Then, I will finish school.After graduation, I want to find a job. For a marriage you need lots of money. If we haven’t any money we can’t get married. So, we must earn enough money for our marriage and our own home. Again I have  a lot of plans(是有很多計劃想在婚前完成吧?!) to finish before getting married, As long as you love me, you won't mind it, will you?(只要你是愛我, 你不會介意的, 是嗎?). You may find a job and then take a trip(這裡的take a trip 是叫他在這兩年間去旅遊還是叫他找到工作並等兩年後飛來接你呢?) in these two years. Two years will go very fast. You may also take care of your mother during this period of time(在這段期間會比at this time在這時候恰當一點).I am sorry that I can’t be always by your side. When you miss me, you can write to me or make phone calls to me. We will keep in touch until we are ready to get married.Wish you happiness all the time.Marcia 劃線的是有修改過的地方，括弧中是簡單補充說明的地方。如果上文是妳要寫的真實信件翻譯，希望上面的修改能有助於妳清楚表達了妳想要表達的心意，也祝福妳，希望妳能努力追求得到妳的人生和幸福!

Answer 3

I haven't seen you for a while.
You should be more serious ...
I wish your mother get well soon.
I am not ready to marry you.
So you must to wait for 2 more years.
I will be graduated.
We need more money for our wedding.
If we don't have any money , we can't get married.
Although........before we get married.
If you really love me, you will agree with me.
You aslo can......at this moment.
Please forgive me that I can't always on your side.
you can wirte me letters or make a phone call to me.
We have to keep in touch until we get married.

2006-10-23 23:33:49 補充：
我只是將錯的重寫,沒寫到的就是對的!

Answer 4

Dear John:

How have you been? I haven’t seen you for ages. Do you miss me? How about your mother, is she well? You should be serious about taking care of your mother. I wish your mother recover speedy and well. I am writing this letter to you because I want to discuss our marriage. I am not ready to get married with you, so you must wait for me for another two years. Now I am a student because I want to learn lots more and make a lot of friends. I will be more mature within two years.
After the graduation, I want to get myself a job. You need lots of moneyto ready for marriage. If we haven’t have any money, we can’t get married. So, I must earn money for our marriage and home. Although I have finished a lot of things before married, loving each others is the main point. You can look for a job and then take a trip after two years because two years will run so fast. You can take care of your mother at this time.
Please forgive me, I can’t be beside you anytime. If you miss me, you can write letters or make some phone calls to me. We have to keep in contact until our married.

Best Wishes.

Love,
Marcia.

Answer 5

Dear John:
How have you been? I haven’t see you for a long time. Do you miss me? How is your mother? Is she ok? You should look after your mother frequently. I wish your mother recover speedy. I write this letter to you because I want to discuss our marriage. I am not ready to married you. You must wait for me two years. because now I am a student. I want to learn more and make more friends. I will be more mature in two years and wait for me when I graduate from school.
After I graduate I want to fine a job. If we marry we will need a lot of money. If we don't have enough money we can't get marry. So, I must earn money for our home and family . Although I have finished a lot of things before married, If only you love me you don’t care about this. You can look for a job or take a trip in two years, then times will past faster. You can also take care of your mother at this time.
Please excuse me. I can't always beside you. If you miss me, you can write letters or call me. We can keep in contact until our wedding.
Hope you can be happy all the time.
Marcia
不好意思喔！有些畫線的部分我沒辦法瞭解您的意思。所以我就沒幫您改。大致上是這個樣子...若有錯誤之處請多多包涵︿︿

Answer 6

我看上去

文去大概上都還ｏｋ＾＾

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