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消除非洲的科技落差
Dispel the scientific and technological drop of Africa

Mlogik是非洲一家新成立的公司
Mlogik is a new company in Africa

Mlogik的地點在模里
Mlogik in Mauritius.

它是利用開源碼科技來設計與銷售加值行動服務
it make source code science and technology to design and sell adding value service.

他們的目標是在2006年底之前將業務擴展到整個非洲。
Their goal is to expand the business to the whole Africa before the end of 2006.

Mobile for Good (M4G) 是一個社會公民福利計畫，
Mobilefor Good (M4G ) is a social citizen's welfare plan,

目標是利用行動電話技術來減少貧窮、改善發展中國家人們的生活。
The goal is to make use of technology of the mobile telephone to reduce poorly , improve the life of people of developing country.

這個計畫將透過簡訊傳遞重要的健康新聞、聘僱資訊，與社區訊息.
This plan will transmit the important health news , engage the information of employing through the news in brief, with community's information.

希望能夠讓生活缺乏的人們也能得到資訊。
Hope that people who can let life lack can receive information.

這些只是發展中計畫的一部分.
These are only a part of the plan while developing.

這計劃讓每個非洲人都邁向數位時代。
This plan lets each African march toward digit era.

Answer 1

消除非洲的科技落差
To eliminate the dearth in technology of Africa
(這不是完整的句子)

Mlogik是非洲一家新成立的公司
Mlogik is a newly established company in Africa.

Mlogik的地點在模里
Mlogik is located in Mauritius.

它是利用開源碼科技來設計與銷售加值行動服務
With the open source code technology, it designs and sells mobile services with added value.

他們的目標是在2006年底之前將業務擴展到整個非洲。
Their goal is to expand the business across Africa before the end of 2006.

Mobile for Good (M4G) 是一個社會公民福利計畫，
Mobilefor Good (M4G ) is a social welfare plan for citizens.

目標是利用行動電話技術來減少貧窮、改善發展中國家人們的生活。
The goal is to make use of the technology of mobile phones to reduce poverty and improve the life of the people in developing countries.

這個計畫將透過簡訊傳遞重要的健康新聞、聘僱資訊，與社區訊息, 希望能夠讓生活缺乏的人們也能得到資訊。
This plan will circulate, through text messages, important health news, employment communications, and community information, in order to make them availabe to people short of resources.

這些只是發展中計畫的一部分.
These are only part of the plan in progress.

這計劃讓每個非洲人都邁向數位時代。
This plan will bring all Africans into the digital era.

我把其中兩個句子合併, 這樣比較通順.

Answer 2

Mlogik的地點在模里
Mlogik is in Mauritius.

它是利用開源碼科技來設計與銷售加值行動服務
It designs and sells additional activity services by using Open Source technology.

他們的目標是在2006年底之前將業務擴展到整個非洲。
Their goal is to expand their business to the whole Africa before end of 2006.

Mobile for Good (M4G) 是一個社會公民福利計畫，
Mobilefor Good (M4G ) is a social welfare plan for citizens,

目標是利用行動電話技術來減少貧窮、改善發展中國家人們的生活。
The goal is to use the technology of the mobile telephone for reducing poorly and improving the lives of people in the developing country.

這個計畫將透過簡訊傳遞重要的健康新聞、聘僱資訊，與社區訊息.
This plan will transmit the important healthy news, informations of employment, and messages of community by sending news flashes.

希望能夠讓生活缺乏的人們也能得到資訊。
Hoping that people who lacked livings can also be able to receive informations.

2006-10-22 07:41:27 補充：
before end of 2006 應該是不用加the喔其他沒改的都還ok