1) Please kindly inform me what time of the session will be?
2) If possible, could you tell me what equipment will be required?
Is it correct?
2006-10-17 05:43:39 · 4 個解答 · 發問者 Wai Yan 2 in 社會與文化 ➔ 語言
1. Please kindly inform me when will the session begin.
第一，用please kindly後面唔需要加問號；第二，用when比what time...更簡單直接，simple english is good english!
2. If possible, could you tell me what equipments (what kind of equipments) would be required?
用would會好過will少少，俾人感覺冇咁strict，不過睇情況啦，不能就一句句子一概而論
2006-10-17 06:04:02 · answer #1 · answered by Roy 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
如改用 order form 會更smooth:
Please let me know when will the session be started. (order form, no ?)
If possible, please tell me what kind of equipments are required.
2006-10-17 12:35:42 · answer #2 · answered by byc8111 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
1)錯
2)OK
1) Please kindly inform me what time the session will begin.
or
1)Could you please inform me what time the session will begin?
2006-10-17 05:58:29 · answer #3 · answered by auyeung_ks 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
1) Could you please let me know when will the session begin?
2) Could you please let me know what kind of equipments will be required?
2006-10-17 05:49:13 · answer #4 · answered by Gary 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋