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The title is called"My father's habit"

Going shopping some food is my father’s favorite outdoor activities on weekend. And only weekends are his leisure time in all the week. Sometimes, he was in search for milk, fruit, meat. And all kinds of food that could not only fulfill our stomach but also satisfies my Dad’s shopping desiration.

As far as I am concerned, as a busy officer, he regard this is more controlling by buying all sorts of his wanted-goods food than working in office!

Answer 1

The title is "My Father's Habit."
Going shopping for some food is one of my father's favorite outdoor activities on weekends.
And it is only on weekends that he has leisure time.
Sometimes he was in search of milk, fruit, and meat.
And all kinds of foods could not only feed our stomach but also satisfy my dad's shopping desire.
In the eyes of me, my father, as a busy officer, finds it more controllable to buy all sorts of foods he wants than to work in the office.

Answer 2

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