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Question

The factory needs more power and energy to work, and therefore fuels is the major source, made from fossil fuels, such as coal, oil and natural gas formed millions of years ago. However, burning fuels can made harmful air that called carbon dioxide. In addition, animals are breathing also exist it. But plants take in carbon dioxide and release oxygen from photosynthesis that plants serve to remove some of carbon dioxide from the atmosphere by absorbing it. Eventually, decaying reminds of animals and plants be covered and buried under ground over millions of years later, time turned it into fossil fuels and carbon cycle will be return if we continue make more exhaust. These are all greenhouse gases whose concentration in the atmosphere has been increasing in recent decades, contributing to global warming.

那我可以出書囉!我要準備考IELTS，這篇是我自己寫的。

Answer 1

Factories need energy to function. Fuel is the major sources such as coal, oil and natural gas formed millions of years ago.

However, burning of fuel casues air pollution that called carbon dioxide, which can be harmful to animals. But plants absorb carbon dioxide and release oxygen from photosynthesis so that plants can remove some of carbon dioxide from the atmosphere.

Eventually, the decaying remains of animals and plants buried underground over millions of years turn into fossil fuels and carbon if we recycle them.

The concentrations of several greenhouse gases have increased in recent decades, contribution to global warming.

我改寫一下，供參考

2006-10-06 16:55:32 補充：
最後一句打錯了應是contributing to global warming

Answer 2

很抱歉, 您要出書還有點早.
上面那篇錯誤是很多, 多到不知道要怎麼去改.
請您自己先修改一下再來好了...

Answer 3

Factories need more power and energy to work, and therefore fossil fuels are the major sources, such as coal, oil and natural gases formed millions of years ago. However, burning fuels can make harmful air called carbon dioxide, which also comes from animals during breathing. But plants take in carbon dioxide and release oxygen from photosynthesis, and thus serve to remove some of carbon dioxide from the atmosphere by absorbing it. Eventually, decaying remains of animals and plants buried under the ground over millions of years later turn into fossil fuels. Carbon dioxide will accumulate if we continue having more consumption of fuels. Having been increasing in concentration in the atmosphere during recent decades, carbon dioxide is one of the greenhouse gases that contribute to global warming.

Answer 4

這篇文章我在三民的閱讀測驗看過，好像完全一模一樣~"~