英文自我介紹

Question

我要英文自我介紹~煩請善心人士幫忙翻譯一下~
大致上我還翻的出來~只想對照看看對與否~~麻煩嚕!
以下是自我介紹的中文~~

我肄業於弘光科技大學五專護理科
因為我對英文有興趣所以選擇了應用英文系
我來自彰化在家中排行老大
我的興趣是唱歌~逛街
謝謝大家的聆聽

Answer 1

我肄業於弘光科技大學五專護理科
I am studying at 5-year-academy of Hunkuang University for nursing.
我畢業於弘光科技大學五專護理科
I graduated from nursing department of 5-year-academy of Hunkuang University.
因為我對英文有興趣所以選擇了應用英文系
I chose to study applied English as I'm interested in it.
我來自彰化在家中排行老大
I am the eldest child in my family which is based in Changhua.
(如果你不習慣based in的用法﹐可以改為﹕
I'm from Changhua and I'm the eldest child in my family)
我的興趣是唱歌~逛街
I like to sing and stroll around the streets at my leisure.
謝謝大家的聆聽
Thank you for your attention。

註﹕恐怕你把“畢業”筆誤成“肄業”﹐所以多加一句備用
唸什麼學校要用study at
唸什麼學科要用study for
at my leisure是“在我閒暇時”