這是我自己寫得英文推薦信,是以國小校長的名義的寫,請高手幫我看看哪裡的文法有問題,如何修改,謝謝~最佳者二十點感激餽贈~
It is a pleasure for me to recommend Miss Lee XX Lun , a former teacher of Taichung City Cheng Kung Elementary School.
I am principal of Taichung City Cheng Kung Elementary School. During 2005/8~2006/4,she was a teacher of my school.
She let my impression be profound in her teaching period. First,she can use many different teaching skills promotion class's and grade's study result,and her students very enjoy in her class. Second,she has displayed excellence in the Elementary school teacher's Impromptu in Taichung ,she is the first one to get the honor in Taichung City Cheng Kung Elementary School,I am so proud of teacher Lee.
In addition to teaching skills, teacher Lee has good Interpersonal relationship. She is welcome and maintains the good interaction with school teachers, share teaching attainment or skills. Everybody extremely appreciates her to use the positive optimistic manner facing all challenges, certainly I am not exceptional.
Based on Miss Lee XX Lun 's performance at work, I believe she
will be a highly successful student at your school. I support her application for
admission without reservation, and would appreciate any assistance you can offer her.
2006-09-24 07:39:08 · 4 個解答 · 發問者 Þ³Û 1 in 社會與文化 ➔ 語言
謝謝不好意思和六翼你們的建議,很衣針見血呢~謝謝!
2006-09-26 08:20:50 · answer #1 · answered by Þ³Û 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
agree 不好意思的看法....看起來你的推薦信，太General...可以適合很多科系使用.....也就變成太一般的內容，完全無吸引力....
2006-09-24 11:23:01 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
一些淺見：
你要唸哪個科系?
為何適合唸那個科系?
你的相關優點與缺點?
Impromptu 中文是什麼意思?
Impromptu得獎年份?
為何離開該校?(離職原因?)
2006-09-24 09:40:34 · answer #3 · answered by travelpa 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ummm...just wanna let you know...
if this is a business letter, your font all wrong...
2006-09-24 09:16:05 · answer #4 · answered by 耶比 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋