請幫我修改
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The winter is coming.
Maybe people think that’s strange, but in the four seasons, I like winter most.
It’s cold and windy, so everyone has to wear heavy clothes.
That’s why I love it, to wear those clothes makes I feel warm in cold.
這裡make後我不確定是否加I 因為唸起來怪怪的
不知道有沒有用錯
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I love to buy things when it is on sale, and to buy it at a low price, so I have some VIP cards: bookstores, restaurants, and so on.
They are useful and can make me happy because when I buy them cheaper, I always feel very good.
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For me, my mom is a superwoman.
She does all the housework, and she is very in style, she wears fashionably
Most important of all, she can cook well.
She usually makes yummy food for my family, we usually have great meals.
I love her so mush, and I’m proud of having such a mom.
2006-09-17 18:28:33 · 4 個解答 · 發問者 Anonymous in 社會與文化 ➔ 語言
make後面應該是加for
2006-09-17 18:58:54 · update #1
第三篇應該也很怪嗎
1.2篇的中文本身就怪怪的
本來就不是很完整的兩篇心得
1.冬天要來了
也許有人覺得很奇怪吧 但在四季中 我最喜歡冬天了
冬天風很大天氣很冷 每個人都得披上厚重的外衣
那就是為什麼我喜歡冬天 它讓我感覺到寒冷中的溫暖
(因為我喜歡在很冷的天氣穿很多件衣服啦 ... 個人的癖好)
2.我喜歡在有特價時買東西,而且用很低的價錢去買,所以我有多張貴賓卡(我喜歡買特價的東西,為了要用便宜的價錢買到東西,所以就又辦了很多張貴賓卡啦 = =" ):餐廳的 書局的 等等 ...
2006-09-17 19:18:59 · update #2
他們(卡)很實用而且讓我開心 (買到便宜讓我很高興 ... ) 因為每當我便宜買的時候,我都會感覺很棒 ...
就這樣囉 ... =.=
解答贈點的部分我會改進的 ...
2006-09-17 19:19:05 · update #3
1.
The winter is coming at once.
It is strange, in the four seasons, I like winter most.
Because It's cold and windy, everyone has to wear heavy clothes.
That's the reason why I love it.
Meanwhile those clothes makes mee feel warm in cold.
2.
I love to buy on sale things, because I have some VIP cards: bookstores, restaurants, and so on.
They are useful and can make me happy because when I buy them cheaper, I always feel very good.
3
Mymom is a superwoman in my mind.
She can do all housework.
She is very in style andwears fashionably
Most important of all, she can cook very well.
She usually makes yummy food to my family, we usually have great meals.
I love her so much, and I’m proud of having such a mom.
2006-09-17 18:50:11 · answer #1 · answered by mee 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
你想進步的話，不如附上你的中文原文和你自己翻的英文，..還有..提高解答贈點..!讓大家糾正你的英文!也可提昇自己的程度，線上不少達人，要善用啊!!...(讀起來真的不是英文表達方式..+ +|| )
2006-09-17 18:48:45 · answer #2 · answered by 勾登 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
你的文意怪怪的 你是直接翻的嗎?
2006-09-17 18:38:30 · answer #3 · answered by 爛芹菜 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
1.我覺得應該要在make後加me
唸起來比較順
2006-09-17 18:32:11 · answer #4 · answered by L 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋