I´m in my beach home.The weather is very hot here.nThere are a lot of people because is national holiday.
2006-09-11 14:31:09 · 9 respostas · perguntado por princess 3 em Educação e Referência ➔ Outras - Educação
Olha, eu naum sou professora d ingles, mas tem umas coisinhas q posso ajudar...
I´m at my beach house and the weather is very hot. Besides, as it is National Holiday, there are a lot of people here...
2006-09-11 14:36:21 · answer #1 · answered by Gabi 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Está muito bom, mas faria uma discreta mudança...
I’m in my beach home. The weather is very hot here. There are MANY people because is national holiday.
Kisses
2006-09-12 00:33:58 · answer #2 · answered by Leka 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
acho que ñ
2006-09-11 23:05:09 · answer #3 · answered by bruxinha 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Bom, ia citar algumas mudanças mas a Gabi fez primeiro... as mudanças que ela fez estão corretas.
2006-09-11 21:44:46 · answer #4 · answered by celissima 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ok.
2006-09-11 21:37:46 · answer #5 · answered by Carioca Desesperado 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
O inglês não admite muito bem o sujeito oculto, portanto o ideal seria pôr "today" após o "because". Mas eu não posso afirmar que tua frase está incorreta.
2006-09-11 21:37:30 · answer #6 · answered by ptalexandre 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Eu tiraria o "n" antes de "There", hehehe
2006-09-11 21:36:46 · answer #7 · answered by Golden_Ace 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
gostei da frase.
tah certinha
bjos
2006-09-11 21:34:55 · answer #8 · answered by gabi 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ok! voce está de parabens!
2006-09-11 21:32:47 · answer #9 · answered by org. 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋