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自我介紹
我的名字是廖姿婷 出生於79.4.17 星座是牡羊座
國中時大家都叫我「怪獸」 因為我很高 力氣又大
我最喜歡吃牛排 為什麼勒 因為很貴又不能常吃
我做過最糗的事是:跟同學玩大冒險 輸了 幫一位男同學脫褲子
我做過最驕傲的事:半工半讀一年 賺了我第一個10萬元
我的興趣是 排球，游泳，看電影，玩線上遊戲
為什麼會轉學 因為我覺得，讀書真的很重要
先把書讀好再找工作也不遲
自我介紹完畢

Introduce myself
My name is a Zi Ting Liao to was born in 79.4.17 .
My horoscopes are Aries.
Junior high school everyone call me "monster" because my energy is
big and very high.
I like most to eat steak.
why?
Because is very expensive so can't often eat .
The most shameful matter that I have ever done:Played games with classmate to lose to take off pants for a male classmate.
The most proud matter that I have ever done :Parting work、parting study a year amd earned my first 100,000 dollars
My hobby are volleyball,swim,go to the movie,and playing on-line game.
Why will turn to learn ? Because I feel studying is really very important.
Read the book first、then find the work be not late either .

Answer 1

依照我的看法是
Introduce myself
My name is Zi Ting Liao was born in 79.4.17 .
My horoscopes Aries.
Everyone call me "monster" in Junior high school ; because my energy is
big and very tall.
I like to eat steak very much.
why?
Because is very expensive but we can not always eat it .
The most shameful thing that I have ever done:Played games with classmate to lose to take off pants for a male classmate.
The most proud thing that I have ever done :Parting work、parting study a year amd earned my first 100,000 dollars
My hobby is playing volleyball,going swim,watching〈seeing〉 movie,and playing on-line game.
Why do I change my school? Because I feel studying is really very important.
Read the book first、then find the work be not late either .
大致上就是這樣

Answer 2

.那麼巧!我也4/17出生的!我也叫做姿婷!但不是79年生的! 也姓廖!