我現在升高二了，發覺作文滿重要的，
我有寫過幾篇作文給老師批改，題目就都是聯考題目，
分數嘛，滿分20分，都拿10-13分左右，
我滿想拿更高的分數= =…，
寫的時候我覺得比國文作文簡單很多....，因為就分三段，
然後100多個字就可以了，
但事後看自己寫的會發現有\"離題\"的現象..，
可是寫的時候會覺得唸過去很通順，自己並沒有發現阿…
滿奇怪的..很想改過來..= =+
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問大家如何寫英文作文的？
提供幾個經驗吧：），謝謝了!!
2006-08-13 19:47:55 · 7 個解答 · 發問者 口*3 4 in 教育與參考 ➔ 考試
=_=我也很恨作文ㄚ....不只是英文ㄉ..中文ㄉ現在也是ㄌ(中文忘太多ㄌ.)
我在美國ㄟ...我們一定要寫至少5ㄍ段落...=_=a
現在要寫超難ㄉ X
這裡是如何寫作文ㄟ方法
How to Write a Five Paragraph Essay
1.Before you begin writing, decide on your answer to the question asked of you. This is your basic thesis.
在你寫作文之前.先想想妳ㄉ答案在那ㄍ問題. 這是你最基本ㄉ論點.
2.Before you begin writing, decide on what three pieces of evidence/support you will use to prove your thesis.
在你寫之前,先決定你3ㄍ可以支撐你ㄉ論點ㄉ證據.
3.Write your introductory paragraph. Place your thesis along with your three pieces of evidence in order of strength (least to most) at the end of this paragraph.
在寫你ㄉ開端ㄉ第1ㄍ段落.將你ㄉ論點跟你3ㄍ支持你ㄟ論點ㄟ證據以最弱到最強排列
4.Write the first paragraph of your body. You should begin by restating your thesis, focusing on the support of your first piece of evidence.
在寫你ㄉ內容ㄉ第1ㄍ段落(也就是第2段落) 你必須重新申述你ㄉ論點....然後專注於你ㄉ第一ㄍ支撐ㄟ證據
5.End your first paragraph with a transitional sentence that leads to paragraph number two.
用轉承字結束你ㄉ第2段落.以幫助你牵引到第3段落
6.Write paragraph two of the body focusing on your second piece of evidence. Once again make the connection between your thesis and this piece of evidence.
7.End your second paragraph with a transitional sentence that leads to paragraph number three.
8.Write paragraph three of the body focusing on your third piece of evidence. Again, make the connection between your thesis statement and this piece of evidence.
9.Begin your concluding paragraph by restating your thesis. Include the three points you have used to prove your thesis.
10.End your concluding paragraph with a statement of extension which will (hopefully) cause the reader to look beyond what you have written. You do not include new evidence in your last paragraph.
Tips:
1. Never use I or you (unless specifically told that it is allowed).
2. Do not use contractions in formal writing.
3. Organization is one of the most important parts of good writing. Make sure to organize from the first paragraph on
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I'm really SORRY !
2006-08-14 06:07:52 · answer #1 · answered by yadda 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
真的阿??不過還是會因為一些小錯誤而被扣光…冏rz..
2006-08-19 14:01:17 · answer #2 · answered by 口*3 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
其實能有10-13分也算不錯的吧！
2006-08-17 15:32:20 · answer #3 · answered by ? 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
多練習阿如果可以就每2.3天就寫一篇作文...最好是每天一篇啦...寫完之後再拿給專家幫妳改...順便教妳錯誤部分該怎麼寫寫久之後就不太會出錯囉
2006-08-16 08:25:04 · answer #4 · answered by ? 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
可以試聽「紐約上城」(New York Uptown) Mike老師的課
這個班「聽力」與「閱讀」全部由Mike老師教授
網址是 http://www.nyuptown.com.tw/
有興趣可以先上Mike老師的部落格逛逛
http://www.wretch.cc/blog/Mikeliu
或與Mike老師談談
聽聽他的經驗
2006-08-13 20:05:24 · answer #5 · answered by mike 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
多用複合句，少用簡單句也多背一些片語、句型喔
2006-08-13 20:01:25 · answer #6 · answered by ? 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
英文作文...當然組織性是很重要的...Well-organized 是最讚的呀
所以...通常一開始會以開門見山法...表的你的觀點看法...或是目的吧
最好不要拐彎抹角...
四段法式最好的...可能是第一段如上面所說表達立場...
第二第三...就是過程或是舉例...過渡部份...
然後第四段就要Summarize起來...也就是Conclusion總結...
最後你的想法選擇 為什麼之類的...通常要呼應第一段...
你再寫的時候隨時都要想說 這個題目的目的...
他要的是什麼...當然...同樣的字不要用太多...多用同義字...
還有不要打轉...就是一直停在一個point而接不下去...
像打撞球一樣...這一步的時候...要想下一步怎麼走...
一開始寫的時候
你可以大概畫一下一個表...第一段:...............第二段...... ....etc
這樣在組織起來...比較好發揮喔~~
2006-08-13 19:55:32 · answer #7 · answered by 冠霖 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋