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Question

幫我看看順不順暢，哪裡需要改?
which of the following is the most appropriate topic sentence for the paragraph blow?

(A) An effective speech promotes (A)一個有效的說話能力能引起行動

(B)The result of a speech is money (B)說話的結果是錢

(C)Eloquence speaks louder than action (C)口才勝於行動

(D)Action speaks louder than words (D)行動勝於空談

_______________. There is a speaker and a listener, and the result of the speech is action. David Lloyd George said, \"The finest eloquence is that which gets things down; the worst is that which delays them.\" If your purpose is to entertain the result is laughter. If your purpose is to instruct, the result should be that the audience can act with greater knowledge in the future.

_______________.有一個說話者和一個傾聽者，而說話的結果是行動。大衛‧羅依‧喬治說「最好的口才是能讓事情解決；最差的口才是讓事情延誤。」如果你的目的是使人歡樂，那得到的結果是笑聲。如果你的目的是命令別人，那得到的結果應該是能讓聽眾在未來的行動中能多加考慮。

順便告訴我要選那一個 為什麼?

Answer 1

基本上妳已經翻得不錯了 稍作修改就可以更順
以下是我的建議
which of the following is the most appropriate topic sentence for the paragraph blow?

(A) An effective speech promotes (A)一場有效的演說能激勵(提振)人心

(B)The result of a speech is money (B)演說的結果是金錢

(C)Eloquence speaks louder than action (C)雄辯勝於行動

(D)Action speaks louder than words (D)行動勝於空談 (做勝於說)

_______________. There is a speaker and a listener, and the result of the speech is action. David Lloyd George said, "The finest eloquence is that which gets things "done"; the worst is that which delays them." If your purpose is to entertain the result is laughter. If your purpose is to instruct, the result should be that the audience can act with greater knowledge in the future.

_______________.有一個說話者和一個傾聽者，而演說的結果是行動。大衛‧羅依‧喬治說「最佳的雄辯是能讓事情解決；最差的只是讓事情延誤。」如果你的目的是娛樂聽眾，那得到的結果應是笑聲。如果你的目的是"教育"別人，那得到的結果應該是能讓聽眾在未來的行動中能具有更多的知識。

順便告訴我要選那一個 為什麼?

我覺得是A
從整段話的意思裡可以了解
一場好的演講應是讓能激勵聽眾

Answer 2

(A) An effective speech promotes (A)有效的說話溝通能力能才能促成目標(B)The result of a speech is money (B)良好的演說就可促進獲利其他應該沒問題  個人淺見請參考[e-mail]://tw.myblog.yahoo.com/twntnacys 切磋一下 認為翻得好到我的網址和部落格捧個人場 不一定要用我的服務 純知識交流囉 幫個忙選我的答案為最佳解答 免得投票令人糟蹋 (亂投票已有6百多分被糟蹋掉了)