英文自傳修改

Question

希望英文不錯的人可以幫我改一下看有沒有寫的不好的地方，因為我本身的英文很破，謝謝幫忙囉。
一、Growth background
I am born in a well-off family, but because afterwards in the family has had some accidents, caused the content family to change color originally, afterwards on alone nurtured me by the mother to grow up with elder brother, also because of this reason, caused me also to have to come the same age child to be maturer than, to be independent, because of the home environment instantaneous change relations, caused me to see in the many society\'s realistic surface, but let me in this section of time realize a great deal, also therefore my individuality is also rubbed melts quite round, EQ also also must come well compared to common schoolmate, moreover was facing some not not reasonably The matter perhaps suffers when the human looks down upon, I cannot have any too many complaints, but is transforms it as mine power, and tries to find solution to solve it, because the complaint was cannot solve the matter, but these in the future will foster regarding me in matter processing perhaps some personality special characteristic has the very tremendous influence.
三、Mass organization experience
The university time once has participated in many mass organizations, has music nature traditional Chinese music society, the movement table tennis was a team , as well as service nature department academic society and social service group, but is participating in these mass organization activity period , also once has held the post of two year department team party chiefs as well as a year department can meet
information minister.

這個自傳是要應徵用的，很急，麻煩大家的幫忙了。

一、成長背景
我出生在一個小康的家庭，不過後來因為家裡發生了一些變故，使得原本美滿的家庭變色了，之後就暫時由母親單獨扶養我跟哥哥長大，也因為這個原因，使得我比同年齡小孩還要來的成熟、獨立，因為家庭環境瞬間改變的關系，使得我看到了不少社會上的現實面，在這段時期裡可是讓我體會良多，也因此我的個性也被磨的比較圓融、EQ也比一般同學還要來得好，而且在面對一些不合理的事情或是遭人看不起時，我不會有什麼太多的抱怨，而是將它轉化為我的動力，並且想辦法去解決它，因為抱怨是解決不了事情的，而這些對於我日後在事情的處理上或是一些人格特質上的養成有很大的影響。

三、社團經歷
大學時期曾參加過許多的社團，有音樂性質的國樂社，運動性質的桌球系隊，以及服務性質的系學會與社會服務團，而在參加這些社團活動期間，也曾擔任過兩年的系隊隊長以及一年的系會會資訊部長。

請不要用翻譯軟體，因為我也是用那個的 = ="，所以我知道那個翻的不是很好，謝謝

Answer 1

成長背景
我出生在一個小康的家庭，
不過後來因為家裡發生了一些變故，
使得原本美滿的家庭變色了，
之後就暫時由母親單獨扶養我跟哥哥長大，
也因為這個原因，
使得我比同年齡小孩還要來的成熟、獨立，
因為家庭環境瞬間改變的關系，
使得我看到了不少社會上的現實面，
在這段時期裡可是讓我體會良多，
也因此我的個性也被磨的比較圓融、
EQ也比一般同學還要來得好，
而且在面對一些不合理的事情或是遭人看不起時，
我不會有什麼太多的抱怨，
而是將它轉化為我的動力，
並且想辦法去解決它，
因為抱怨是解決不了事情的，
而這些對於我日後在事情的處理上或是一些人格特質上的養成有很大的影響。
社團經歷
大學時期曾參加過許多的社團，
有音樂性質的國樂社，
運動性質的桌球系隊，
以及服務性質的系學會與社會服務團，
而在參加這些社團活動期間，
也曾擔任過兩年的系隊隊長以及一年的系會會資訊部長。
Background that grow up
I belong to family born in a well-to-do level,
But later on because some accidents have taken place to the family,
Make the originally happy family change color,
Later mother brought up me and grew up with the elder brother alone temporarily,
Because of this reason too,
Maturity , independence of making me also want than with the age child,
Because the relation that family's environment changes in the twinkling of an eye,
Make me see it the reality in many societies,
But let me realize a lot during this period,
Individual character of me round to melt rub too either,
EQ will come good than general classmates too,
And while face some unreasonable things or scorned for by peopling,
I will not have any too much complaint,
But turn it into my motive force,
And try every possible means to solve it,
Because complain that can not solve the thing ,
And forming very great influence on having some personality specialities to my treatment in the thing in the future in these.
Corporation's experience
University period has joined a lot of corporations ,
Music -like national music society,
Table tennis of movement nature is a team,
And service to learn it with the community service group,
During participating in these corporation activities,
It is to meet a information minister that it has taken on that too two years in team's team leader and one year.

Answer 2

專業英文履歷與自傳翻譯,
提供你參考看看:

http://tw.myblog.yahoo.com/jw!w6gPRaOCFQVCeNg8iHiYXJOJIRSG2Lw-/archive?l=f&id=5

Answer 3

大哥你的文章要動大手術
你是不是拿中文自傳用翻譯軟體翻的
最好還是post上中文自傳
這樣直接翻會快點