這段用中英文自我介紹美語應徵工作的對話有那些錯誤？20點

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這段用中英文自我介紹美語應徵工作的對話有那些錯誤？20點

這段用中英文美語應徵工作(自我介紹)的對話有那些錯誤？(20點)
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A:請你自我介紹。
A: Would you introduce yourself please?
B:是的我叫DARBID 今年XX歲剛從臺中搬來花蓮一個星期已經在花蓮定居了我喜歡花蓮的環境空氣比臺中新鮮很多人群和車輛都比臺中少很多道路也比較寬闊房子間的距離也比較大適合我居住的品味此外這裏餐廳提供的食物也比較新鮮。
B: Yes of course, my name is David, I am XX years old. I just move to Hualien from Taichung in one week. And I have been settled down in here. I like this environment, the air is fresher than Taichung, the crowds and cars are less number than Taichung city too, the roads are wider, and the spaces between houses to houses are bigger also, those are suiting me to live. And the restaurants supply fresher food always.

A:請談談你從前的工作經驗。
Could you talk about you ex-worked experiences?
B:我是兒童美語老師來花蓮之前在XX國小教美語。
B: I was an English teacher who taught at XX elementary school.

A:為什麼會來這裏應徵這份工作？
A: Why do you come to apply this job ?
B:我剛搬來花蓮就業服務中心的顧問告訴我花蓮比較沒有兒童美語的工作職缺所以紹介我來應徵這份工作主要是這份工作可以藉重我的美語能力此外我也很希望能經常跟外國人士交談作貿易這比只在課堂上教授美語更為實際
B: I just move to Hualien, the assistant Hualien Employment Service Center who tells me there is few work’s chance for English teacher so she recommends me to apply this job. That is because it can use my spoken English ability. Besides I always hope I can discuss business to foreigners, that should be more reality than teach English in class.

A:你有那些專長？
A: What are your special skills?
B:除了美語之外，我還會網頁設計、電腦文書製作、寫書法。
B: Besides spoken English I can design Home Page and make office document and the skills in penmanship.

A:你的希望待遇是多少？
A: How much salary would you want to get a month?
B:希望月薪能在30000元萬左右。
B: I hope it can be about thirty thousand.

A:你曾經出過國嗎？
Ever you been went aboard?
B:有的，我去過美國、日本、新加坡、香港、菲律賓、越南、泰國等地。
Yes, I do. I have been went to America, Japan, Singapore, Hongkong, Philippine Vietnam, and Thailand.

2006-07-17 16:46:25 · 10 個解答 · 發問者 Dabid 2 in 社會與文化 ➔ 語言

(補充內容也要翻譯，才給20點。)
A:如果你在這裏工作，你願意跟工司簽一年的契約嗎？
A: If you work at here would you sign a contract for a year?
B:我想沒問題。
Yes, I think it is no problem.

2006-07-17 16:48:35 · update #1

A:你對大理石了解多少？
A: How much you know about the marble?
B:事實上幾乎完全不了解，不過我的學習能力很強，很快就能掌握並熟悉我職務上的責任。
B: In fact, I do not have any knowledge about of marble, but I have very strong ability to learn the something new, so I can charge my new job immediately.

2006-07-17 16:49:12 · update #2

A:還有沒有其他想了解公司的地方？
Ever you have any thing you want to know about this company?
B:上次我來的時候張先生很親切地告訴了我一些關於工作上的流程所以這一方面我對公司大概有一些了解了但是我在之前沒有接觸國際貿易的商用英語，不過我知道相關商用英語字彙與句型大概不會超過一百句如果我蒙貴公司錄用的話我希望你提供我相關的文件我回去後會積極準備正式上班的時候就能馬上為公司效力此外別無其他問題了

2006-07-17 16:49:42 · update #3

B: Last time I met Mr. Chung he told me such thing about the process of the job kindly so I know a little about this job. But I do not contact about the international trade before, and I know if I can charge one hundred common sentences pattern of business English then I can handle my job.

2006-07-17 16:50:29 · update #4

And if you decide to hire me could supply me some English forms, I am going to study it when I back my home, then when I take this job I can really work immediately.

2006-07-17 16:50:42 · update #5

A:好不過你不用太急請你等候公司的通知
A: Good, but do not hurry just wait for the notice please.
B:謝謝很高興與你的這一場會談
B: Thank you for this meeting.

2006-07-17 16:51:13 · update #6

更正...And I have been settling down in here....

2006-07-17 18:32:05 · update #7

更正
... How much salary would you want to get for a month?
...I have the very strong ability to learn the new things....

2006-07-17 18:44:45 · update #8

更正
...How much do you know about the marble?
...Good, but you do not hurry just wait for the notice please.

2006-07-17 18:54:14 · update #9

10 個解答

2015-07-24 10:11:56 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋

2015-07-07 04:10:25 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋

2015-06-14 07:37:05 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋

學任何語言不外乎就是要有恆心跟毅力

我覺得白天有工作的上班族特別適合線上學習英文

才不用下了班就急急忙忙趕著去補習班上課

光來回車程就省了1~2個小時，省下的時間可以多背好幾個單字

也可以輕鬆在家線上學英文，想學好英文的人這是一個很不錯的機會

用正確的方法一次把英文學起來!!

下面推薦的只要填表就可以免費試聽了喔

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二、English town 免費試聽 http://j.gs/5lFB

二、Tutor4u空中美語免費試聽 http://j.gs/5lFD

2015-06-01 21:44:42 補充：
學任何語言不外乎就是要有恆心跟毅力

我覺得白天有工作的上班族特別適合線上學習英文

才不用下了班就急急忙忙趕著去補習班上課

光來回車程就省了1~2個小時，省下的時間可以多背好幾個單字

也可以輕鬆在家線上學英文，想學好英文的人這是一個很不錯的機會

用正確的方法一次把英文學起來!!

下面推薦的只要填表就可以免費試聽了喔

一、TutorABC 馬上體驗 http://j.gs/5qHn

二、English town 免費試聽 http://j.gs/5lFB

二、Tutor4u空中美語免費試聽 http://j.gs/5lFD

2015-06-01 17:42:59 · answer #4 · answered by George 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋

2015-05-22 09:40:24 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋

2014-10-21 06:23:32 · answer #6 · answered by jeanne 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋

2014-08-31 13:05:51 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋

你厭倦往返補習班浪費的時間和體力嗎
你想在家裡躺在沙發，就可以上課嗎?
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超過500多門課程，為各界人士提供優質的線上教育服務。

自100年6月成立以來，使用會員在一年內就已突破3萬名，並培育出許多優秀的學員，

學員踴躍分享行動補習帶來的便利與效果，累積許多佳績見證。

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2014-06-25 19:26:14 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋

Vailerine好手，看來20點非妳莫屬了！

2006-07-18 09:29:10 補充：
這一段如何講更「道地」？
I enjoy children around me all day long. We love each other, we treat each each other naturally and sincerely. We play and learn at the same time, we always have good time in our class. Teaching English to kids is fun.

2006-07-24 12:38:10 補充：
Roxy+DC's mama ~~~
You eat american shit always.

2006-07-24 12:44:38 補充：
Roxy+DC's mama~~~~教你一句閩南語，
你老子我，愛怎麼講就怎麼講。
Your Father ME, who said what I like to say.

2006-07-18 05:18:20 · answer #9 · answered by Dabid 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋

Could you talk about your ex-work experiences?

… who told me there is few work’s chance for an English teacher so she
recommended…

Ever you been to aboard?
Yes, I did. I have been to America…

2006-07-17 21:58:40 補充：
In fact, I do not have any knowledge about of the marble, but I have the very strong ability to learn …

…could you supply me some English forms… I back to my home…

2006-07-17 17:58:24 · answer #10 · answered by ? 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋