面試英文自我介紹

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各位大大,以下是我自己翻譯和使用Dr. eye翻譯出的英文自我介紹,煩請各位幫我潤飾潤飾,看看有哪邊需要修正的.感謝大家的幫忙~~~~~~~~~``

我叫○○○，從高中起就開始半工半讀，畢業於台北商專，主修國貿。老師總是說我很活潑、負責，在學校常為同學們詢問的對象。遇到問題時會以溝通的方式處理並詢問大家，不喜歡悶不吭聲而做錯事，寧可事前花較多的時間學習，也不願到最後才一一收拾後果。在家排行老么，大家各自打拼維持家計。不喜歡太過平靜的生活，所以喜歡旅遊、也愛看書，空閒時會跑到書店看一整天。目前想要換充實、忙碌的工作，不然很快就會被社會給淘汰。雖然一切都還在學習中，但仍會全力以赴，達成目標。


My name is ........ Begin the part study from high school, graduate in National Taipei College of Business, major in international trade. The teacher always talks about me very vivaciously, responsible, often for targets inquiring it of classmates in the school. Will deal with and inquire everybody by way of communicating while meeting the problem, it is too bored to utter a sound but do the wrong thing not to like, it would rather take more time to study in advance, unwilling not to tidy up the consequence one by one until finally either. It is young to rank at home, everybody strives and maintains the family expense each. Do not like living a calm life very much, so like travelling, liking reading, will go to the bookstore to see for a whole day when being idle. Want to change substantiating, busy work at present, otherwise will be eliminated by the society soon. Though all still will go all out, will reach the goal in study.

Answer 1

老實說上面翻譯的錯誤很多
你是面試用的,所以下面有些我會放比較口語的用法
並且把在家排行老么，大家各自打拼維持家計這句話移到前面
Hi, My Name is xxxx the yougest child in my family, the family members working hard to maintain the family. Therefore, i have been working as part time student since high school. I graduate from National Taipei College of Business and major in International Trade. Teachers view me as a vivaciously and resposible student and i am always beening the one, classmates will come to when they have problems. When there is problem, i always tend to solve it by well communication with others and also by group discussion. As i believe that without asking, the chance of getting mistakes will be higher. Therefore, i rather spending more time to look for the right answer instead of doing things quickly, then spend more time to correct the consequence cause by wrong decisions. I enjoys challenging life so i like to travel around, but i also enjoy reading which i visited the bookstore whenever i was free. The target for myself right now is looking for a challenging and meaniful job which enable me to learn, as i belive that without learning, a person is easliy eliminated by the society. Although i am not fully experience with the job, i will try my best to learning, reaching the goal and targets set by the company.

2006-07-07 14:49:37 補充：
上面翻譯的是指 你用DR EYE翻譯的部份

Answer 2

My name is ........ I started to work part-time and study part-time since high school. I graduated from National Taipei College of Business and majored in International Trade. My teachers always refer me as an active and responsible student. My classmates often come to me for suggestions in school. When dealing with problems, I like to communicate with everyone to seek for solutions. I rather take more times to study and prepare in advance than make mistakes and suffer for the consequences later. I am the youngest in the family. Everyone strives to work for living in the family. I don't like to live a plain life, so I love to travel and read. When I have free time, I can spend all day in the bookstore to read. Currently I want to change to a job where I can improve my abilities through busy works. It is very competitive out there and I don't want to be eliminated too soon. Although I am still in the process of learning but I will give my best efforts and reach my ultimate goals.

Answer 3

Dear Sir,
My name is XXX. I started as a part time student in highshool, and graduated in National Taiepei College of Business, majoring in International Trade. The teacher always say that I'm an active and responsible, that I am a role model that every student would inquire about.
When handling problems, and issues, I would try to communicate with every people concerned and try to find the most suitable solution. I don't like making decisions without thinking properly and consulation. I'd rather spend much more time finding the proper solution to solving the problem rather than cleaning the mess done in the end.
The youngest of my family, I share my responsibilities to my family's expenses.
I am an outgoing and active person, who enjoys travelling, books, going to bookstores when I have free time.
Now, I want to have a job that gives me what I need, the feeling of learning new things everyday, improving myself all the time. That way I won't be left behind by the society.
Even though everything is still in the process of learning, but I'll do my best to achieve my goal.