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The Importance of Newspapers
Nowadays newspapers have great influence on our life. No one can deny that newspapers have many advantages. They are regarded as one of the most effective means of communication. To begin with, reading newspapers enables us to enlarge our knowledge in all respects. Next, reading an amusement page adds fun to our life. Most important of all, reading newspapers keeps us informed of the events happening in the world every day.
Yet, if newspapers are used improperly, they will become harmful. Some reports have a bad effect on the mind of children or teenagers. Some people may use them to do illegal things. Newspapers sometimes carry the news of untrue reports, rumors , and obscenity. Just like watching television, there are many merits and shortcomings in reading newspapers. Undoubtedly, we should weed out the defects of newspapers and retain their merits.

Answer 1

報紙報紙的重要性現今有巨大影響在我們的生活。沒人可能deny, 報紙有許多好處。他們被認為最有效的通信方式的當中一個。開始與, 讀報紙使我們擴大我們的知識在各方面。其次, 讀娛樂頁增加樂趣來我們的生活。最重要所有, 讀報紙保留我們被通知事件發生在世界每天。然而, 如果報紙不正當地被使用, 他們將變得有害。一些報告有一個壞作用在孩子或少年的頭腦。某些人民也許使用他們做非法事。報紙有時傳播不真實的報告、謠言, 和猥褻新聞。像觀看的電視, 有許多優點和缺點在讀書報紙裡。無容置疑地, 我們應該淘汰報紙瑕疵和保留他們的優點。

Answer 2

The Importance of Newspapers
Nowadays newspapers have great influence on our life.
* No one can deny some of the advantages by reading newspapers.
* For long, newspapers have been regarded as one of the most effective means of bringing information to people.
* To begin with, reading newspapers enables us to enlarge our knowledge in many respects.
* Next, reading an amusement page would bring fun to our daily life.
* Most important of all, I would say, is that reading newspapers keeps us informed of the events happening in the world every day.
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* Yet, if the information on the newspapers are improperly written or reported, which will cause some damage.
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* Some reports would leave bad influences to children or teenagers.
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* Some people may use newspapers to do some things illegal.
(them在這裡好像在說上面提到了children or teenagers)
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Newspapers sometimes carry the news of untrue reports, rumors , and obscenity.
* Just like watching television, many merits and shortcomings are found in reading newspapers.
* Undoubtedly, we should try to weed out the defects of having newspapers in our life and retain the merits of what newspapers actually have brought to each of us.

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