訂正英文作文..(看文法有沒有錯..文章順不順..)

Question

Well..
I think maybe I should say sorry to you.
As a matter of fact, I\'m really more insterested in another camps.
Another reason is that..
I think I have known who am I and what am I to you..
Now, I \'m trying my best to take away my feeling to you day by day.
Cause the word \"friend\" may be a kind of 沉重 to me.
Please forgive my self-love..

Perhaps I\'m even nothing to you, am I?
So everything is my own problem..
Though I also want to be friend with you,
that\'s really too hard for me to do..
Cause my heart is upseted whenever I see you.

Sorry again..
Maybe we can be a real friend one day.
The day when my feeling to you can really fade away..

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謝謝唷~^^

Answer 1

Well..
I think maybe I should say sorry to you.
As a matter of fact, I'm really more "interested" in another camps.(用another camp或是other camps)
Another reason is that..
I think I have known who "I am" and what "I am" to you..
Now, I 'm trying my best to "let go of" my feeling "for" you day by day.
Cause the word "friend" may be kind of "heavy" to me.
Please forgive my self-love..

Perhaps I'm even nothing to you, am I?
So everything is my own problem..
Though I also want to be "a friend of" you,
that's really too hard for me to do..
Cause my heart is "upset" whenever I see you.

Sorry again..
Maybe we can be a real friend one day.
The day when my feeling "for" you can really fade away..

Answer 2

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應該不用改
Well..
I think maybe I should say sorry to you.
As a matter of fact, I'm really more insterested in another camps.
Another reason is that..
I think I have known who am I and what am I to you..
Now, I 'm trying my best to take away my feeling to you day by day.
Cause the word "friend" may be a kind of 沉重 to me.
Please forgive my self-love..

Perhaps I'm even nothing to you, am I?
So everything is my own problem..
Though I also want to be friend with you,
that's really too hard for me to do..
Cause my heart is upseted whenever I see you.

Sorry again..
Maybe we can be a real friend one day.
The day when my feeling to you can really fade away..