誰能幫我翻譯?還有文法有錯嗎??謝謝..

Question

***My name is Chia-Chi Chen. I graduated from Shin Shing Senior High School this June. I live in Tao-Yuan. I am optimistic and always willing to learn new things. There are five people in my family. When I was child, my parents paid much attention to the development of my personality. They were strict with me but very understanding. ’’Actions speak louder than words’’ is their philosophy of educating me. Therefore their good deeds influenced me very much. My father is a serious and down-to-earth person. My mother has mind personality. I am bought up in such a healthy atmosphere and environment, so I have a positive outlook on life.
***My hobbies are traveling and reading. Through traveling I can hang out with my friends, catch some fresh air, and get more acquainted with the Mother Nature. By the way, from reading I can always find myself a quiet place to relax and through reading I can understand my self more. During the three years of senior high, I get some certificates For example, I have Chinese cuisine cookery, class C, the level 4 of English proficiency test.
***Languages are interesting to me because I think languages are so important to tourism. I will work hard in improving languages ability. Contacting people who come from different cultures and traveling around all of the places have always been my dream.
***That is why I choose your department to be my further learning. I hope I will have the chance to develop my interests and capabilities through your teaching. I will work hard and try my best during the four years.

Answer 1

***My name is Chia-Chi Chen. I graduated from Shin Shing Senior High School this June. I live in Tao-Yuan. I am optimistic and always willing to learn new things. There are five people in my family. When I was child, my parents paid much attention to the development of my personality. They were strict with me but very understanding. ＊＊＊我的名字是芡歐鼠尾草－X 的陳。 我這六月從外脛 Shing 高中畢業。 我住在道－元。 我是樂觀的和總是樂意的學習新的事物。 在我的家庭中有五個人。 當我是孩子的時候，我的父母對我的個性的發展給予很多的注意了。 他們除了最理解之外對我感到嚴厲。 ’’Actions speak louder than words’’ is their philosophy of educating me. Therefore their good deeds influenced me very much. My father is a serious and down-to-earth person. My mother has mind personality. I am bought up in such a healthy atmosphere and environment, so I have a positive outlook on life. ’'行動說比字更高聲’’是他們教育我的哲學。 因此他們的好行為非常影響了了我。 我的父親是嚴重的和實際的人。 我的母親有心個性。 我在如此的健康氣氛和環境下被盡購，因此，我有在生活上的積極的景色。  ***My hobbies are traveling and reading. Through traveling I can hang out with my friends, catch some fresh air, and get more acquainted with the Mother Nature. By the way, from reading I can always find myself a quiet place to relax and through reading I can understand my self more. ＊＊＊我的嗜好正在旅行和讀。穿越旅行我能和我的朋友一起玩，抓一些新鮮的空氣，而且和自然母親變更多熟知。 順便一提，從讀我總是能發現我自己一個安靜的地方放鬆和透過我能了解的閱讀我的自己更多。During the three years of senior high, I get some certificates For example, I have Chinese cuisine cookery, class C, the level 4 of English proficiency test. 在三年的資深高度的時候，我舉例來說得到一些証書，我有中國烹調風格烹調法，班級 C ，英文專業技巧測驗的同高的 4 。  ***Languages are interesting to me because I think languages are so important to tourism. I will work hard in improving languages ability. Contacting people who come from different cultures and traveling around all of the places have always been my dream.＊＊＊語言是有趣的對我因為我認為對觀光事業語言是如此重要。 我將在改良語言能力方面努力地工作。 連絡來自不同的文化的人而且周遊所有的地方一直是我的夢。 ***That is why I choose your department to be my further learning. I hope I will have the chance to develop my interests and capabilities through your teaching. I will work hard and try my best during the four years.  ＊＊＊所以的我選擇您的部門是我進一步學會。我希望我將有機會開發我的興趣和能力通過您的教學。我艱苦將工作和將嘗試我最佳在四年期間。

Answer 2

認同樓上的意見。
不過咚咚的英文這麼破，搞不好還看不懂你寫的。

Answer 3

《↖╭★咚＿咚☆╮↘》
If ur english isn't good enough,and the others r having the right to judge u,so please don't b so super childish to revange others back in the bad way!!!