The system of a down is in your thinking.
Everyone are poisoned by your.
You kill every angels.
You make whe angels become devil.
You are evul and pathtic killer.
Do you know?
You did not kills we.
You kills yourself.
Your heart is so ugly and make me sick.
Get over I but you devil.
I have to find friends.
And I will not like you.
Please get out off my head.
Please\'\'\'\'\'\'\'.
2006-05-28 16:18:06 · 4 個解答 · 發問者 ? 2 in 社會與文化 ➔ 語言
The system of a down is in your thinking.
當機系統就在你腦中。
Everyone are poisoned by your.
每個人都被你下毒了。
You kill every angels.
你殺了所有天使。
You make whe angels become devil.
你把天使變成魔鬼了。
You are evul and pathtic killer.（你有打錯字，evul應是evil，而pathtic應是pathetic，而且這句的單複數沒指明）
你是邪惡又可悲的殺手。
Do you know?
你知道嗎？
You did not kills we.
你沒殺死我們。
You kills yourself.
你殺死自己。（自殺）
Your heart is so ugly and make me sick.
你的心腸好醜陋，讓我想吐。
Get over I but you devil.
克服我，除了你這個魔鬼。（此句主詞、受詞顛倒錯亂，如有翻錯，請見諒！）
I have to find friends.
我必須去找朋友了。
And I will not like you.
而且我不喜歡你。
Please get out off my head.
你滾開我的腦中。
Please'''''''.
拜託！拜託！拜託！
2006-05-28 16:30:14 · answer #1 · answered by ? 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
錯字很多
可是都沒有改到
You kill every angels.
應改為
You kill every angel.
every 後面的詞不會加s
every是指每一個，是單數
You kills yourself.
應改為
You kill yourself.
you是第二人稱，後面的動詞不能加s
You did not kills we.
應改為
You did not kill us.
第三人稱後面的動詞才要加s
還有後最後面的受詞，也應該是us
2006-07-16 23:50:39 補充：
Everyone are poisoned by your.
應改為
Everyone are poisoned by you.
最後的受詞用you，不是用your
You make whe angels become devil.
應改為
You make our angels become devil.
受詞要用our，不是we
Please get out off my head.
應改為
Please get out of my head.
get out of+人、事、物
不是get out off
2006-07-16 19:50:31 · answer #2 · answered by MINA 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
請出去我的頭.....這句真是經典...ㄏ哈哈...
2006-05-28 16:43:37 · answer #3 · answered by 淵 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
下來的系統是在您認為。
大家由您毒害。
您殺害每天使。
您做whe 天使成為惡魔。
您是evul 和pathtic 兇手。
您知道嗎?
您沒有殺害我們。
您自殺。
您的心臟是很醜惡和使我病。
得到I 但您惡魔。
我必須找到朋友。
並且我不會喜歡您。
請出去我的頭。
請'''''''.
2006-05-28 16:23:25 · answer #4 · answered by HA 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋