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Question

我印象最深的電影是鐵達尼號!!
雖然片子已老,不過我認為他是一部滿感人的電影,內容是船上乘坐了1500多人,船上航海過程中,忽然遇到了冰山,當時狀況緊急投射了8個訊號彈,但是時間已晚,此時1500多人中只能救援少數人,所以有的人為了生存不惜搶奪可以活下來的機會,有的捨不得親人只有哭泣,整艘船上此時只有悽涼的氣息所有人穿上了救生衣,一一跳下海了,當救援人員回到現場時,才發現此時的大海已經填滿了被凍死的人,在無情堅硬的冰山以及冰冷的大海中也吞沒了上千人的生命!!
中翻英
My impression deepest movie is Titanic! ! Although flat and thin piece already old, but I thought he was a completely touching movie, the content is on the ship rides more than 1,500 people, on the ship has navigated in the process, suddenly has met the iceberg, at that time the condition urgently projected 8 signal flares, but the time has been late, this time in more than 1,500 people only could rescue the minority person, therefore some people in order to survive did not hesitate to rob may exactly down the opportunity, some gave up the family member only to have the sob, on the entire ship this time only had miserable breath all people to put on the life jacket, 11 jumped went to sea, when the rescue group returned to the scene, Only then discovered this time the sea has already filled up the person which froze to death, has also embezzled over a thousand person of lives in the heartless hard iceberg as well as the ice-cold sea! !

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Answer 1

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The movie that impressed me the most is Titanic. Although it is quite an old film, still I think it is very touching.

Answer 2

謝謝你幫我改中文不過我要的是英文若可以你順便幫我翻翻你的英文ㄅ
我要口試的是英文拜託大家幫幫我ㄅ

Answer 3

我的印象最深刻的電影力大無比! ! 雖然平和稀薄的片斷已經老, 但我認為他是一部完全地接觸的電影, 內容是在船乘駕超過1,500 個人, 在船駕駛了在過程中, 突然遇見了冰山, 那時情況迫切地估計8 枚信號火箭, 但時間是晚, 這時候在超過1,500 個人能只搶救少數人, 因此某些人民為了生存沒有猶豫搶奪也許確切地擊倒機會, 一些放棄家庭成員只有嗚咽, 在這時候只有淒慘的呼吸所有人民的整個船穿上救生衣, 11 跳躍去海, 當搶救小組回到了場面, 只有然後發現這時候海已經填滿結冰對死亡的人, 並且盜用了在生活的一千個人在無情的堅硬冰山並且冰冷海!
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