幫我修改我的英文部分(我不會翻譯所以多多指教)..謝謝

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英文部分:My hometown is in the Ta Tu of Taichung, here\'s the visiting, delicacies and antiques.  I begin to introduce my hometown now, first, the visiting, I think Chui Fen station is the visiting, because I see before where someone took a picture, and where is visited that it is open.  Though there stream of people a few , but will go before reaching the examination for entering school quickly, and they will buy Chui Fen - Cheng Kung train ticket, hope that can have an examination smoothly by oneself.         Second, delicacies, the watermelon is local products in the Ta Tu, it’s output is very much in this place, because the environment here is suitable for watermelons grow, the watermelon here is very sweet and very delicious, it’s various in style, quality is good, I think the watermelon here very delicious, it’s my favorite fruit.          Third, antiques, I know the Ta Tu there are Huang Hsi academy, here is a tertiary historic site, where I go to visit visiting, hope I can be admitted to the ideal school.  Most students will all come to the Huang Hsi academy to visit and visit, bless oneself to be admitted to the schools wanted.         Finally, I hope everybody can cherish the antiques here, can keep forever, don\'t destroy it. 中文的意思:我的家鄉是在台中縣大肚鄉，這裡有觀光景點，美食和古蹟。現在我開始介紹我的家鄉，第一，觀光景點，我認為追分火車站是觀光景點，因為我之前看到有人在那裡拍照，而且那裡是開放參觀。雖然人潮不多，但是快到升學考試前會有很多人前往，並且他們會買追分－成功的火車票，希望自己能考試順利。　　第二，美食，西瓜是大肚鄉的特產，他的產量非常多在這個地方，因為這裡的環境適合西瓜生長，所以這裡的西瓜非常甜和非常好吃，他的種類多、品質佳，我認為這裡的西瓜非常好吃，他是我最喜歡的水果。　　第三，古蹟，我知道大肚有磺溪書院，這裡是三級古蹟，我有去那裡拜拜過，是希望我能考上理想的學校。這附近的學生大部分都會來磺溪書院拜拜，保佑自己能考上所想要的學校。　　最後，我希望大家能愛護這裡的古蹟，可以永遠保存下去，不要破壞它。大肚：Ta Tu觀光景點： visiting古蹟 ： antiques追分： Chui Fen成功： Cheng Kung磺溪 ：Huang Hsi  我要修改後的英文 

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My hometown is in Ta Tu, Taichung, there are tourist attractions, delicacies and historical building here. Let's begin to introduce my hometown.

Firstly, the tourist attractions, Chui Fen station is where tourists cannot miss out. This place is opened to the public, so everyone can travel to here and take pictures. Although there are not much people come here, but here will be flooded by students before the examination. They will buy Chui Fen - Cheng Kung train ticket, which means "get-marks" and 'success" to hope that they will have good luck during the examination.

Secondly, our delicacies. Watermelon is local fruits of Ta Tu. Watermelons grow fruitfully in this place, because of the environment here is suitable for watermelons to grow. Watermelon here is very sweet and delicious, it has different variety yet the quality is good. I think watermelons here are delicious, it’s my favorite fruit.


Lastly, historical building. The building is called Huang Hsi Academy, which is a tertiary historical site. I went there to pray sometimes wishing I could enter my ideal school. Now, most of the students will also come to the Huang Hsi Academy like I did and hope the God will bless them to enter their ideal school.

I hope everyone who come to visit not to ruin but protect the building. So, it can be last forever and let other people to visit here