請幫我看這樣翻譯會很奇怪嗎?若有錯可幫我修正嗎?謝謝.急!

Question

請提醒王Eric先生,由於我們車子無法停在航站大廳門口,所以請他遇見我們的司機後,在航站大廳外等後.我們的司機會開車來接他


Please remind Mr.Eric Wang after he meet our driver pls wait outside due to our driver can not parking the car in front of the arrival hall.and our driver will pick him up later.

Answer 1

Please remind Mr.Eric Wang that since our driver can not park the car in front of the arrival terminal, after he met our driver in the arrival gate, please ask him to wait at outside of the arrival terminal, our driver will pick him ouｔ later. 您寫的大致也能通， 我再幫你重寫一遍． 雖然長了一點， 不過詳細解釋會較好一些． 想必這位Mr.Eric Wang 一定是您公司的客戶吧？ 此外如果司機不通英文， 可以把一張上面寫著"Please wait for me at outside of the arrival terminal, I　will bring my car to pick you up later "的條子在Mr.Eric Wang走到大廳時交給他(萬一他沒收到e-mail時， 就很有用就算他收到了e-mail， 也會欣賞您的細心．  

Answer 2

Please remind Mr. Eric Wang because our car can't park in front of terminal hall.
our driver will pick you up after you wait for our driver at termianl outside.

Answer 3

Please kindly remind Mr. Eric Wang to wait out side of the Arival Termainal after he met with our driver. Our driver will drive over and pick him up since we cannot park the car infront of the Arrival Terminal.

Answer 4

請提醒王Eric先生,由於我們車子無法停在航站大廳門口,所以請他遇見我們的司機後,在航站大廳外等後.我們的司機會開車來接他

Due to the no parking regulation, please remind Mr. Eric Wang to wait for our driver in front of the arrival hall after meeting him. Our driver will come back with the car and pick him up.

Answer 5

恩小小奇怪！1.句子太長了沒有段落感 2. 中式英文，主詞、句子混成一團，不知道所說的是哪一個? 3. due to 用法 後面接名詞，非句子！

因此我的小修改如下:
Please give Mr. Eric Wang a reminder. Since we can not park the car in front of the arrival hall, our driver will meet him first. And then, our dirver will go to drive the car from the parking lot and then pick up Mr. Wang right outside of the arrival hall where they meet.
(請提醒Eric Wang先生！因為我們的車無法停在航站的到站大廳前，我們司機會先去跟他碰面。隨後，我們司機將去停車場開車然後再去他們碰到面的地方
大廳航站外接他。

小小建議！多說明幾句，讓對方清楚一點！