拜託英文高手幫我翻譯自傳~TKS

Question

找工作要英文自傳可是我英文太破了..以下:

各位徵才及招攬工作夥伴的公司及主管大家好:

很高興在這自我介紹,我住台北市,家裡有父母一兄一妹,個性是隨和認真,
如果對某件事很有興趣會積極的投入在其中.

我的求學過程很順利,跟老師同學的互動關係也不錯.會想透過人力銀行求職的原因是因為覺得它的求職系統蠻健全的,而且透過此管道撮合彼此成為工作夥伴,也是一種趨勢.

本身退伍之後隨即投入金融界的領域,在證券業服務了6個月,因為此工作使我認識了不少人並得到豐富的金融知識.

如果真的有幸能成為貴公司的一員,營造與客戶宛如一家的服務信念,相信一定是件樂在其中的工作.由於我本身是國貿系畢業,加上有證券類的證照,相信符合某些公司徵才的條件.另外我也想證明自己不是草莓族,願意配合公司政策服務到底,在職其間也會多考些專業證照以適應大時代中職場上的競爭及公司期許.感謝貴公司同仁能不厭其煩的看完本人的自介,謝謝~~~~~!!

樓下的大姐
雖然你翻的不錯
不過感覺怪怪的
好像是直接翻譯ㄝ..

Answer 1

Each so only then and gathers the work partner the company and manager hello: Very happily introduces oneself in this, I live Taibei, in the family have a parents brother younger sister, the individuality am amiable am earnest, if has the interest to some matter to be able very much the positive investment in among I study the process very smoothly, schoolmate's interaction relations is also good with teacher The meeting wants to penetrate the reason which the manpower bank seeks employment is because thought it seeks employment the system perfectly, moreover penetrates this pipeline to reconcile each other to become the work partner, also is one kind of tendency After itself retires from the armed services invests the financial circles immediately the domain, has served for 6 months in the negotiable securities industry, because this work made me to know many people and obtained the rich financial knowledge If really fortunately can become your firm, builds with the customer just like a service faith, believed certainly is happy in the among work Because my itself is the country trade is the graduation, in addition has the negotiable securities class card to illuminate, believed conforms to certain company so only then conditions Moreover I also want to prove oneself is not the strawberry race, is willing to coordinate the company policy service, in office during also can test a specialized card to illuminate adapts in the great time on the duty field competition and the company hoped Thank your firm colleagues to be able to take great pains looked myself from lie between, thanks ~~~~~! !

Answer 2

專業英文履歷與自傳翻譯,
提供你參考看看(內有撰寫自傳要點文章):

http://tw.myblog.yahoo.com/jw!w6gPRaOCFQVCeNg8iHiYXJOJIRSG2Lw-/archive?l=f&id=5