請幫我訂正英文~人與人之間的改變從寫信到打電話

Question

With fast developing of economics and technologies, it is rapid to use mobile phone and e-mail to contact other people. These new inventions bring so much convince for us. However it also causes a far distance from people. Because we can\'t accept loves through the medal computer.20 years ago, people used to write letters to connect. The letters were real which could be touched and reserved. Whenever we are in pressure or sadness, it is useful to help us recover soon. The traditional love letters can be generated due to the reason which make sweet feeling to each other.

Answer 1

以下是我的修正With the rapid development of economy and technologies, it is convenient to use mobile phone and e-mail to contact other people. These new inventions bring so much commodization for us. However, perhaps to our surprise, it only prolongs more distance among people. After all, we can't perceive loves through these mechanic inventions. 20 years ago, people used to write letters to connect withc each other. Letters were more substantial because they could be touched and reserved. Whenever we are in pressure or sadness, it is useful to help us recover soon. The traditional love letters can be generated due to the chemistry these letters can produce and also the sweet feelings they bring out.

Answer 2

The advancements in economy growth and technology has prompt more use of mobile phones and emails as the main tool for human connection. These new inventions has brought us so much conveniences and yet some say that it has made people further apart. The reason is because we cannot receive all the emotions and love through emails and msn. ( It is too vague to just say there is no love - please develope your argument more fully - also you need to be more precise on the new inventions for communication, perhaps you can bring in a bit of the history of communication)

20 years ago, letter was the main medium for communication between each other. (You CANNOT say the letter is real!! inapproriate language) The letters are tangible and tactile and can be touched and preserved. When we are under pressure (not in pressure) or feeling sad and lonely, old letter can be a very good source of encouragement and has a soothing effect. (Generated is not used like that, please check the dictionary for proper usage) The last line I don't get what you mean.

Answer 3

我的英文不是很好,只能大概寫出我發現到的問題><
With fast developing economics and technology,it is rapid to use mobile phone and e-mail to contact other people.These new inventions bring so much conveniencee for us.
However,it also causes far distance between people. Because we can't accept love through computer.
20 years ago, people wrote letters to contact. Letters were written with emotions and they can be kept. It helped us to recover from pressure and sadness.
Traditional love letters were written and used due to the reason that they provides a sweet and warm feelings between lovers.