拜託幫忙批改一下此文章...通順流暢且不失原意....急需

Question

A female is 19 years old in Taichung. When she was unmarried, a female
infant had been borne last year. The female infant was born only 11 day.
Unfortunately, she was dead suddenly. However, the female and her boyfriend not only reported to the policeman also buried the corpse randomly in the hill. Than, the policeman excavated the hill. The female and her boyfriend left marks in the burial place. And the female infant
had been found just as expected. Nevertheless, the infant was discovered
when she has already became dead bones. The female said that the infant
was choked by feed. In fact, she was too scared to be buried the infant when she was unmarried.

Answer 1

一個翻譯的很可怕,另一位沒有回答問題,這怎麼投票啊???

Answer 2

請問你是需要翻譯成中文,還是修改英文的部分?

Answer 3

有牧人的小羊~最後一句的意思是:事實上，因為未婚生子，所以才慌張的將小孩埋在山丘。感激不盡你的指導喔!

2006-04-11 17:03:34 補充：
Kathy~ji3我是想要修改英文部分...謝謝妳