請幫我修一下英文口試~”我最愛雨天”

Question

My favorite weather is a rainy day.
If I were outside it would be very inconvenient. Regardless of go shopping or take a walk. But if I were at home, I always walk to the courtyard and drop the rainwater on my head. Look at the ashy sky. Many little things that we forgotten always can be aroused. Someone ever told me “the rainy days let me in the bad moon and attach to the impulsion to cry. All the tears haunt my past…”
But I am a person who like think about everything. About rainy days, it include a lot of memories. I often played in my courtyard after rain in my childhood. Now, I image a guy would take an umbrella to wait me and just look at me one in a rainy day. It’s about the meaning of rainy days.
A rain will be lovely because summer is coming. If rain in winter it would be cold. But if rain in summer it would be cool. Almost take a walk outside. I believe rainy can be happy if you willing to find out.

英文oral要用的~
可以的話 幫我多加一些東西 因為好像有點太短
文意上也不通順
請大家幫我改一下!!

Answer 1

My favorite weather is a rainy day.

Regardless of the inconvenience it may bring if I want to go out for shopping, I am still fond of rainy days.
if雖然是假設子句，可是這句話不是只有過去才發生，未來的你應該也是會有這樣的想法，所以可以算對於未來的假設喔。

I enjoy walking out in the rainy days, looking up at the sky, receiving the raindrop to refresh my mind. Someone had complained that, “In rainy days,” she said, “I would be in the bad mood and the raindrop may only bring out some bad memories and then, my tears!” Her conclusion is “I don’t like rainy days at all!”

Yet, I am the very one that likes to think. I enjoy especially thinking in rainy days. It reminds me of my childhood. In rainy days, I liked to go out and play with the other kids. After I was back, even though I might be scolded by Mom, I might cry and still I would go out again to play with my good pals in the rainy days.

Now, I may not have the time because of busy school work. However, in such a romantic day, I always image that my Prince Charming would take an umbrella to wait for me to have an even more romantic dinner.

It’s summer time right now. The rain may also cool the hot earth and also cool our bad temper in summer time. When I go out and am sweating because of the power of the cruel sun, I may always pray, “Dear god, bring us rain and cool the world, please.” I really hate to be bathed in sweat. I need to take a bath many times in hot summer days. I may go swimming to cool myself and yet, only to find a crowded swimming pool where I become only angry.

I believe more pleasure could be dug out if you try. What can I say? I really love rainy days!