自己寫的英文文章，附中文翻譯，請幫我修正英文錯的地方

Question

With our technology improvement, we also destroy the environment.
People in order to their life more convents and faster , they build many building witch did not belong to the nature.
However, there are some people work hard for protect our environment and
they try to stop act witch would damage our nature.
Even they do that their life would be threatened.
Everyone should treasure the Earth.
If we damage the environment we would not return to their original appearance easily.
On the other side, if governments support to protect nature, the effect would be obviously.
Humankind should make balance between building and protect the environment.

科技的進步也造成環境的破壞，為了更方便更快速建造了很多不屬於自然的建築。
不過，還是有很多愛護環境的人積極的阻止這些行為，即使有生命的危險。
我們應該珍惜地球，因為一但破壞了，就很難回復
另一方面，政府若能一同維護，效果會更大。
人類應該在保護自然與建設中找一個平衡點。

Answer 1

你自己的翻譯就翻得很好喔,所以我保留了你許多的用法!

科技的進步也造成環境的破壞，為了更方便更快速建造了很多不屬於自然的建築。
With the advancement of technology, we establish many facilities to build up a more convenient and faster life but only to destroy our environment.

不過，還是有很多愛護環境的人積極的阻止這些行為，即使有生命的危險。
However, there are still more people who, regardless of their lives threatened, or even at the cost of their lives, work hard to stop the nature-damaging acts to protect our environment.

我們應該珍惜地球，因為一但破壞了，就很難回復
Everyone really should treasure the Earth not only because we have only one earth but also because, if the environment is damaged, it would never be easy to recover the original appearance.

另一方面，政府若能一同維護，效果會更大。
On the other side, if support can be offered from the governments to protect nature, the effect would be even more obviously.

人類應該在保護自然與建設中找一個平衡點。
Humankind really need to find the balance between construction and environment preservation.

Answer 2

期末考自己做好不好....ㄎㄎ..

Answer 3

Nowadays, the technology is improving but at the same time we are also destroying the environment. In order for people to make their life more convent and faster, they built many buildings which are not parts of the nature.
However, there are people who try hard to protect the environment and stop the damages due to the environment; even though they would have to risk their lives.
People should cherish the Earth; if it is destroyed then it is almost impossible for it to recover.
On the other side, if the government can involve in this "Saving Our Earth" action, it would bring a lot of positive effects.
Human being should find a balance between environment and construction.