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Good evening everyone
My name is XXX. I was born in Taipei but live in 楊梅.
There are five persons in my family, including my parents, my one brother, and my younger brother and me.
My parents work hard to support the family.
We kids get along well with each another.
Our best time together as a family is during dinner every day.
I love them so much！
I like playing (球類運動)桌球、籃球、田徑
工作.品檢員QC
將現場送驗的絲餅做物性分析，物性分析包括橫切面分析、丹尼分析、強伸度分析、沸縮測試和不均勻度分析等。工作是採輪調式，每天都會接觸不同的分析並操作儀器，並將當天的分析數據輸入至電腦印出日報表交由主管審核。
Does the silk cake that send to check on the scene to the thing analysis, the thing analysis includes the cross section analysis, the 丹尼 analysis, strong stretch one degree analysis, the 沸縮 test and an analytical etc..The work adopts the round adjust type, will get in touch with everyday different of the analysis also operates the instrument, and inputs the analysis data of that day to the computer to printout the newspaper form to hand over is examined by the supervisor.

I work in Chung Shing Textile Company.
It founded in 1949.
At presently,there are 1100 persons work here.
The Company markets its products abroad in a brand name which has become synonymous with quality, "Three Gun".

Chung Shing department store and PWC Printed Wire are their relation enterprise.
In early 1991,Chung Shing Textile company established a garment manufacturing plant in Shanghai as a bridgehead; towardsthe Chinese mainland.

In Southeast Asia,the company has esrablished another stronghold in Vietnam.

Answer 1

Good evening, everyone,My name is XXX. I was born in Taipei but live in Yang-mei now. There are five people in my family. They are my parents, one elder brother, one younger brother and I. My parents work hard to support the family. We kids get along with one another very well. The family having dinner together is our best time every day. I love them so much!I like sports such as playing table tennis, basketball and track and field.My postion: Quality ControllerThe content of my work is making material characterization analysis on the striped cake ready for inspection. The material characterization analysis includes transaction analysis, Denier analysis, tenacity and elongation analysis, boiling and shrinking test and uneven analysis, etc. We have to work by shift and every day we will contact different analysis and operate the instruments and input the analysis data into the computer and then print the list of daily report to hand over for examination by the supervisor.I work for Chung Shing Textile Company, which was founded in 1949. For the time being, it has 1100 employees. The Company has marketed its products abroad with a brand name which has become synonymous with its quality as "Three Gun". Chung Shing Department Store and PWC Printed Wire are their related enterprises. In early 1991, Chung Shing Textile Company established a garment manufacturing plant in Shanghai as a main factory to launch the market in Chinese mainland. In Southeast Asia, the company has established another important subsidiary in Vietnam.

Answer 2

這位網友你好

我本身也有遇過這問題

急需用錢 找銀行真的太慢了

我知道 中壢仁寶當舖 有在幫人代辦二胎

估價速度快 放款速度快 息低保密

你可以去詢問看看

我之前有在那裡借過 服務態度好 辦事效率好

真的是短期週轉的好幫手

放心啦!仁寶當舖是政府立案合法當舖

網路上的風評也非常好

在 中壢YKK對面 03-4520077

Answer 3

Everbody .
Hi
l'm XXX
l was born in YAIPEI but now l live in 楊梅
There have five member in my family
they are parents , two brother .
My parents work hand of home .
Our child get well with others
l think the best time in everyday is that
Eat dinner with family
It is nice and l love them !
l like playing table tennis , basketball and track and field