請幫我改英文作文：My favorite subject

Question

If there is someone asks me, “What’s your favorite subject?” My answer is, “English of course!”
I love English for many reasons. The most important is that I like to talk to foreigners very much. That may sound strange and funny, but I really like the way they talk. They are humor,天真的,passionate and seem always so energetic that make you very happy when you talk to them every time. 他們聲音中的表情也很多,感覺很有趣!
Second, I love English songs, especially the old ones. For example,~. 英文老歌很耐聽. Their lyrics are more significant than the popular songs. And there are many different stories behind each of them.
Third, I want to travel all the world.而目前世界共通語是英文, so learning English is the most basic thing I have to do. Otherwise, it will be very inconvenient. We can also get a lot of international information through English. And those international information are really important in the latter society.


ㄜ..寫的很差..辛苦各位了..
裡頭還有一些我不會寫，所以直接寫成中文..
再拜託大家幫我翻譯嘿~甘溫喔~^^
還有那個結尾(最後一段)難產..那個也要拜託囉!!!
謝謝~~~~~~~~~~

Answer 1

以下是我的建議 幾句改一下 會更流暢 再幫你翻幾句
if someone asks me what is my favorite subject. i will answer him : English of course
i like to chat with foriegher very much
they are funny ,kind ,and passionate
their body language make me fell funny
second, i enjoy listening English songs....(後面那句中文就免了 加上去會成贅句)
而世界共通的語言是英語 翻成 and ,the most common language in the word is English
otherwisr 在這裡寫 or 比較好
got a lot of info by English
and the international info are very important for latter society

Answer 2

Sarah 如果是你回答的話 我就投給你了