短篇的英文自傳翻譯

Question

我小時候是由奶奶帶大的，也從奶奶身上學習到許多在學校學不到的知識，也從父母和奶奶的管教及待人處世的態度中學到許多寶貴的經驗；就是為人要誠懇，做事要細心負責，而且還要多多為他人著想；在學校的成績儘管不是頂尖的，但也不算太差，在學校裡也學習到許多知識，當然也是獲益良多，而自中國海專畢業後，因為想要再加強自己的專業知識又繼續唸了長榮大學，在長榮大學哩，我又吸收到了許多比專科更進一步的知識，因為在這裡有許多老師都來自業界，因此所獲得的專業知識和經驗也多了許多。未來則是希望在職場上繼續吸收學習更多且更多元化的知識來補充自己的人生經驗，也希望將來有時間可以再繼續學習加強自己的語言能力，


麻煩英文一級棒的各位大大了～但是嚴禁翻譯軟體！

Answer 1

I was brought up by the grandmother as a child, studied to a lot of knowledge not studying in the school from grandmother too, learn a lot of valuable experience from the attitudes of disciplining and treating people and conduct oneself in society of parents and grandmother too; It is responsible for doing things carefully, and also want and think about others more more even if sincere; Though the achievement in the school is not top, not too bad either, study to a lot of knowledge in the school, is it a lot, since graduate from specially the sea of China, is it strengthen one's own professional knowledge is it read long honour university to continue to want to benefit too certainly, in the long honour university, I absorb to a lot of knowledge more further than the training again, because a lot of teachers come from the industry here, professional knowledge and experience obtained are much more. Hope on-the-job field is it is it study more to absorb to continue and pluralistic knowledge is it supplement one's own life experience to come future, hope to continue learning to strengthen one's own language ability again if having time too,

Answer 2

I am greatly in childhood brought by grandmother of, also learning to many knowledges that can not learn at school from grandmother's body, also the paternal uncle mother and grandmother's tubes taught and acted towards people the conducting attitude high school to many precious experiences;Is a behavior to want sincere, work to want to with quiet attention be responsible for, and still want much many write to think for the others;At school of though the result isn't top, also don't calculate to too differ, at school also learn to much knowledge, certainly also is benefit very many, and after the china sea particularly graduated, want again strengthen own professional knowledge and continued to read the long glory university, at long the glory university mile, I again absorbed much further than specialty knowledge, have many teachers to all come from the industry here, so the professional knowledge and experience acquired were also many many.Will then hope in the future the incumbency field up continues to absorb the learning more and more diversified knowledge to add own life experience, also hope in the future sometimes a the language competence that can continue again to learn to strengthen the oneself.

不知道這樣可不可以~

2006-04-05 00:25:38 補充：
我不確定100%完美，我還不太肯定自己的英文程度，我的答案好像只達到僅供你參考的地步，明確一點的答案你去請教高手中的高手吧!!!