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Question

It suprised me when i first moved to the United States, because you have to have a car to go anywhere you want, even if you just want to buy a pack of chewing gums. In Taiwan, convenient stores are much more popular than malls, you can find one on the street, and two across the street. They are also quite different than the convenient stores in the U.S.. Most of the convenient stores are managing by induivals instead of big companies, they sell Taiwanese food, cigrattes, and drinks, and they open 24/7. Just by the definition, it is really convenient to have those convenient stores everywhere, because they help you to deliver goods but not just sell products, you only need to fill out a form and pay a small fee. And the goods will be there by tomorrow.
We have malls too, families like to get there to buy their daily supplies. Since most people in Taiwan don\'t have cars, so the malls deliver all the food and supplies to your house for no charge.
The malls in the United States are basically the same, but one thing interesting is they have pharmacy in each malls, and you need to have prescriptions to get your drugs. And all the prices on the products are tax included.

你真是天才,我要你幫我改一改我的錯誤,不是較你幫翻成中文,我自己寫的東西還用你來幫我翻嗎?不過多謝了,打這麼久的字

Answer 1

When I first moved to the United States, it suprised me that you need to have a car to go anywhere you want, even if you just want to
buy a pack of chewing gums. In Taiwan, there are more convenience stores than malls, which is that you would be able to find one convenience store on the street, and possibly two other stores across the
street.The convenience stores in Taiwan are also quite different than the convenient stores in the
U.S.. Most of the convenience stores in Taiwan are managed by induivals instead
of big companies. The stores have display items of Taiwanese food, cigrattes, and drinks, and they open 24/7. Just by its definition of "convenience store", it is really convenient to have
those convenience stores located at every corner.  They provide services like delivery services in addition to selling goods.  What you only need to do is to fill out a form and
pay a small fee. And the goods will be delivered there by one day.In Taiwan, there are malls too. Families like to get there to buy their daily supplies and groceries.
Since most people in Taiwan don't have cars, so the malls would deliver all
the food and supplies to your house for no charge.The malls in the
United States are basically the same in layouts and in services, but one thing interesting is they
have a pharmacy service in each mall, and you would need to have prescriptions to get
your drugs. And all the prices on the products are tax included.應該是不含稅吧... not included???

Answer 2

It suprised me when i first moved to the United States, because you have to have a car to go anywhere you want, even if you just want to buy a pack of chewing gums. In Taiwan, convenient stores are much more popular than malls, you can find one on the street, and two across the street.
剛開始我搬到美國的時候有件事讓我很驚訝,因為你必須要有車才能到你想去的地方,即便你只是要買一包口香糖而已.在台灣,便利商店比大賣場還受歡迎,你可以再這條街發現一家,對面那條街找到兩間.

They are also quite different than the convenient stores in the U.S.. Most of the convenient stores are managing by induivals instead of big companies, they sell Taiwanese food, cigrattes, and drinks, and they open 24/7. Just by the definition, it is really convenient to have those convenient stores everywhere, because they help you to deliver goods but not just sell products, you only need to fill out a form and pay a small fee. And the goods will be there by tomorrow.
他們跟美國的便利商店比起來是相當不同的.大多數的店是由個人經營的而不是公司,他們有賣台灣食物,香菸和飲料,而且還是24小時的喔!就好像字面上的意思一樣,到處都有便利商店真的很方便,他們不只是販售產品而已還幫你運送貨品,你只要填寫一張單子和付一點費用就可以了.而貨物第2天就會送到.

We have malls too, families like to get there to buy their daily supplies. Since most people in Taiwan don't have cars, so the malls deliver all the food and supplies to your house for no charge.
我們也有賣場,全家人都喜歡去那邊採購日常用品.因為大部分在台灣的人都沒有車,所以賣場會免費運送食物或用品到貴府.

The malls in the United States are basically the same, but one thing interesting is they have pharmacy in each malls, and you need to have prescriptions to get your drugs. And all the prices on the products are tax included.
在美國的賣場基本上也是一樣的,但一件有趣的事是在各賣場裡都有藥局,你必須要有處方才能拿藥.而且所有產品的價格都含稅.

2006-03-31 23:18:32 補充：
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