這是我寫的作文...可以幫我改文法嗎???謝謝...

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這是我寫的作文...大概文法詞態有一些錯誤...可以幫我糾正一下嗎????謝謝...
For most people, they eat all day outside because they are too busy to cook. Before I went to college, I hated eating at home; I felt the restaurant food was more appealing to me than my moms` cooked. But now I am changing my opinion, I prefer to eat at home.
I think that eating at home the food is fresh and healthful; my mom doesn’t like to put much oil. At our dining table that seldom appears meats, my mom thinks the meats have high cholesterol, it will harm our health. Eating at home we can feel relax, and limit out to wait. The meal surroundings at home are also cleaner than much dirt restaurants.
We don’t know the making processes about the food stands and restaurants, maybe they added some pigments which let the food be delicious, so now I am a little afraid to eat outside.

Answer 1

Most of the people who dine out everyday are too busy to cook. Before I went to college, I did not like home cooking; I felt the food at any restaurant was more appealing to me than my mom’s cooking. But now, I have changed my opinion, I prefer home cooking.I think that home cooking is fresh and healthy; besides, my mom doesn’t like to put much oil into her cooking. Meats are seldom seen on our dining table. My mom thinks the meats have high cholesterol, so eating too much meats is not good for our health. We feel relaxed while eating at home, and we do not need to wait long. Our home is also cleaner than those dirty restaurants, so I also believe the food prepared at home can be more hygienic.We don’t know how the food would be processed at those food stands and restaurants, where the cooks may have added some ingredients that make food delicious. Now, in fact, I am a little afraid of dining out.

Answer 2

Most people, dine out because they are too busy to cook. Before I went to college I hated home cook food as I felt that restaurant provide food that are more tasty and appealing.However now I have change my opinion and prefer to eat at home. I believe eating home cook food are healthier as my mom control the oil input. We seldom have meats as my mom thinks the meats have high cholesterol and it could harm our health. Dining at home are more relax and we do not have to waste time waiting fo our food in the restauratant. The meal is prepare by us and we will ensure that it is clean however in the restaurants we can never tell how they prepare their foods.They might have add extra ingredients to make the food more delicious which is not healthy at all and could also harm our healthy. Now I could think twice to dine out.

Answer 3

好像有不少錯誤@@"可是我不會改!另請高明了

Answer 4

對於大部份人來說, 他們整天都在外面吃那是因為太忙而沒時間煮. 在我上大學之前, 我討厭在家吃飯, 我覺得外面餐廳的食物比我媽煮的更吸引我. 但現在我的想法改變了, 我喜歡在家吃. 我想在家吃飯食物比較新鮮及健康, 我媽煮菜不會加很多油. 在我們的餐桌上很少看到肉類, 我媽想肉類含有很高的膽固醇, 它對我們我健康有害. 在家吃飯我們可以覺得很輕鬆自在, 又不用等. 在家的用餐環境也比那些髒髒的餐廳乾淨多了.
我們不知道外面那些食物攤子及餐廳對食物的處理程序, 或許他們都加很多色素讓食物看起來更美味, 所以現在我都有點怕在外面吃.