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Question

1: I feel Taiwan already became more worse than before. In Taiwan, You can see negative news about the political affairs were reported on the TV program everyday and put all the concern on them. That can not make Taiwan better. Only made most of people more worry about their life.
2: Yes, I think it’s very difficult to be a parent. Before you have your child, everything is easily. After you have your child. You will feel everything is changed. You’ll need more time and money to take care of your child and everything that you want to handle is more difficult.
3: There are so many ways for people to make Taiwan better. At first, to make our environment better, people should not waste any resources .Only if the material can not use anymore. Then you should do the assortment for it before you throw it away.

Answer 1

1: I feel Taiwan has become worse than ever before. In Taiwan, more negative news about political affairs are regularly broadcasted on TV programs which have drawn a lot of attention. The negative news can not make
Taiwan a better society, yet  which actually have made most of people in Taiwan worry even more about their living environment.2:
Yes, I think it’s very difficult to be a parent at this time.  Everything in life can be taken care of much more easily before a child comes to your world. When you become a parent, you will realize that
everything has changed. You’ll need more time and money to take care of
your child, things can get too difficult for a person like you to deal with.3:
There are so many ways to make Taiwan a better place to live. At first, to
make our environment better, people should not waste any resources. You should do recycling until things have been notably not recyclable any more.1. 請加強如何造內有比較詞性的句子.....2. 幾個句子好像有說沒有完3. 用現代式的動詞才是正確的, 因為不是在說過去發生的事情.