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Question

My Beloved Family：
I am Heidi, from Li-Zen high school. I have only one brother. Both my parents are engaged in business. They sell and promote agricultural products in many department stores. In order to help them, I sometimes face the
difficulties in introducing our products to foreigners. Because of this, I determined to be a person who can speak good English.
Enrich School Life In Li-Zen：
After grated from Tai-Ping elementary school, I entered the Li-Zen private junior high school. During the three years at the private school, I felt the pressure from the competition between my classmates. At the same time, I experienced the professional teaching of the teachers.
Luckily, I was able to upgrade to the senior high school of the Li-Zen. Therefore, I got a chance, and was financially supported by my parents and the school to study abroad in Australia. When I got there, I was asked to attend the classes at the local school. This chance provided me with a
real opportunity to know more about the local people and their culture.
After returning from Australia, I attended a test and was qualified to join the English elite class. Through this class, I learned a lot, such as drama, conversation, writing, reading, listening, and grammar. At the same time, I have the chance to attend the drama and English song competitions. Besides,
I was chosen to be the little teacher of Li-Zen’s English camp for elementary school students in the year of 2005.

Answer 1

My Beloved Family： I am Heidi, from Li-Zen high school. I
have only one brother in my family. Both my parents are  in the business field that they
sell and market agricultural products in many department stores. In
order to help them, I need to introduce their products to foreigners in English.  That's the reason why I have determined to be a person who can speak English well.Enrich my School Life In Li-Zen：
After graduated from Tai-Ping elementary school, I entered the Li-Zen
private junior high school. For the past three years at the private
school, I got a lot of pressure from competing with my classmates.
Also at that period of  time, I received a professional teaching from the
teachers. Luckily, I was able to upgrade myself into the senior high
school of Li-Zen. Later on, I was able to get such a chance to study in Australia which was 
supported financially by both my parents and the school.
When I got there, I was asked to attend the classes at a local
school. That chance provided me with a real opportunity to know more about the local people and their culture.
After returning from Australia, I took a test which has qualified me to
join the English elite class.  I learned a lot through this class, such
as playing dramas, conducting conversations, writing, reading, listening, and improving the grammar.  I had a chance to attend the drama and English song
competitions. Besides, I was chosen to be the little teacher of Li-Zen’s English camp for the elementary school students in the year of 2005.文法吧... 須要加強

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