檢查英文讀書計畫 明天要寄 急!!

Question

Study Plan：
Before entering the university
1.Read more books, such as poetry, novels, Bible stories, and mythological literature, in order to expose myself more to Western culture.
2.Arrange a study tour abroad to improve my speaking ability.
3.Learn more about the new developed computer programs.
When I were a university student
I will choose the language teaching to be my major, then continue to pursue for the next higher degree. Achieving my goal to be the bridge between the Eastern and Western cultures is my ambition.
The Goal In Life：
In the global environment, working in the international organization is always the goal in my heart. Therefore, language ability is the means to fulfill the goal.

Answer 1

Study Plan：Before entering the university, I will start to (未來式)1. read more books,
such as poetries, novels, Bible stories, and mythological literature, in
order to expose myself some more to the Western cultures.2. make a study tour abroad to improve my ability in speaking English.3. learn more about the computer programs, which either is new or is under developing stage.If I were a university student(假設語氣, 後面接的句子改為過去式)
I would choose the language teaching as my major, later, I would also like to have the opportunity to
pursue a higher degree in the same subject. My ambition is being able to play a role to connect the Eastern culture with the Western culture, which is also as a goal I would like to achieve in some day.My Goal In Life：Seeing the global environment that changes over time, I have set up a goal for myself is to be able to work in an international organization in the future. Therefore, I believe that my goal will be reached by my being able to use several foreign languages in my workplace.寫得不錯, 本想改一點而已.... 大概是因為你有些動詞用得不好.

Answer 2

亂選~>_<

Answer 3

1.Read more books, such as poetry, novels, Bible stories, and mythological literature, in order to expose myself "to more" Western culture.
2.Arrange a "abroad" study tour to improve my speaking ability.
我覺得 這裡 abroad 應該是要是 形容詞
3.Learn more about the new (developed) computer programs.
我覺得 "developed"可以去掉

When I were a university student??
were是過去式 ~
I will choose language teaching as my major, the可以去掉 to be可以改成as 比較順一點^^
then continue to pursue for the next higher degree. 我不是很懂 pursue在這裡的意思
Achieving my goal to be the bridge between the Eastern and Western cultures is my ambition.
The Goal In Life：
In the global environment, 這一句 好像少了動詞 不知道你會不會想加 To be engage in the global environmet, 從事於環球環近下
and working in the international organization is always the goal in my heart.
Therefore, language ability is the means to fulfill my goal. 用my 代替 the 會比較 強strong 適合當結尾