英文作文~幫我看看有沒有錯誤

Question

My dream is that travel to around the world. Firstly, I will improve some capability. For example, English, French and so on.
In addition, I can find out some information about culture, food, travel resort, history
Now, I should take advantage of the school resource, and take part in study abroad.
I have good ideal to go to backpack trip with my family or friend in the future. There are not only relaxed my body, but also enrich my travelog.
Important of all, I have enough money to go out. I believe that it come true on these days.



可以幫我看看有沒有錯誤,怎樣修改較好呢？(不知通不通順耶,希望看的懂)
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Answer 1

My dream is to travel around the world. First, I will have my language ability improved such as English, French and so on. In addition, I will find some information about different culture in different countries such as food, traveling, and history, etc. For now, I should make best use of the resources at school and plan to study abroad. I have a wish to go on a backpack trip with my family or with my friends in the near future, not only to relax myself but also to enrich my traveling experiences. Although the most important of all is that I should have enough money to go abroad, I believe it come true these years.

Answer 2

我應該要有足夠的錢

Answer 3

My dream is to travel all over the world. First of all, I have to improve some of my capabilities. For example, my English, French,... and so on. In addition to the above, I still need to find out some information about the culture, food, travel resort and history of the world. Now, I should take the advantage of the school resource, and take part in abroad study.I have dreamed of going to a backpack trip with my family or friend in the future. This will not only relax my soul, but also enrich my travellog.
However,I don't have enough money to go out yet.I believe that the dream would come true one day.

Answer 4

幫你改了一下:
My dream is to travel to around the world. Firstly, I can improve some capability of my English, French and so on.
In addition, I can find out some information about culture, food, travel resort, history.
Now, I should take advantage of the school resource, and take part in study abroad.
I have good idea, which is to go to backpack trip with my family or friend in the future. They will not only relaxed my body, but will also enrich my travelog.


Important of all, I have enough money to go out. I believe that it come true on these days.

最後那句不知道你在說啥 如果是在說你不夠錢應該是

Most important of all, I do not have enough money to travel. I believe it will come true sometime soon