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慈濟宮
該宮位於豐原市中山里中正路一七九號，基地面積八八七坪，建築物面積三百餘坪。創建於西元一八○六年,迄今已有一百七十餘年的歷史，主供奉天上聖母，配祀其他諸神甚多。該廟規模恢閎，為三殿兩護龍式建築，古色古香，香火鼎盛，善男信女每日來此參拜者甚多。廟前塑建一對巨獅，威嚴肅穆，氣宇不凡。該廟成為豐原市道教信仰中心，亦是遊覽觀光的聖地，更為豐原市內歷史最悠久及集石雕藝術於一堂的古廟。
Tzuchi Temple
The temple is located at No. 179 Jhongjheng Rd., Fongyuan City, Taichung County which is 887 square meter totally and 300 square meter of building. It is built at 1806 and had more than 170 years history. The main Ethereal is Matzu. The temple is very huge and full with the original decoration and art of architectures. There are a lot of devotees everyday. The temple becomes the religious and tour center. It contained the oldest art of carven sculptures.


中正公園
位於豐原市水源路附近的中正公園，是豐原地區民眾假日遊玩的勝地。中正公園前臨谷、後依山丘而建，步道蜿拾級而上，兩旁椰樹、榕樹綠蔭，適合夏日消暑散步。公園前方建有中國風味濃厚的懷恩亭，涼亭廣場矗立先總統蔣公的銅像一座，公園內附有游泳池和親子遊戲區等等……，是該公園的重要地標。
Jhongjheng Park
Jhongjheng Park that is the leisure place of Fongyuan people is located at the Shueiyuan Rd., Fongyuan City. The front and back of the park are valley and massif. The shade of coconut palm and banyan are planted by the beautiful bent sideways in the park, which is very suitable for a walk in the summer. The pavilion is settled in the front of the park. Beside the pavilion is the bronze statue of Chian Kai-chek. The park also offers various facilities including swimming pool and game place for children and parents.


公老坪果園
位於中正公園與豐原球場之間的公老坪觀光果園，佔地十公頃之多，是中部地區最具規模的觀光果園。園內栽種一百多種的四季果實，供人採食，並 栽種無花果、人參果等珍奇果 樹及各種水果解說課題，讓遊客與小朋友在遊玩之餘兼具教 育功能，目前該園區也朝多角化經營，設有烤肉區、露營區、會議室、渡假小木屋、田園藝術館等遊憩設施。
Kunlauping tour garden
Kunlauping tour garden is located between Fungyuan stadium and Jhongjheng park. The biggest tour garden in the middle Taiwan contains 10 hectare. There are more than one hundred species of fruit trees, which are available for visitors. Capri figs, fruit and various fruit etc are planted there and included in the lessens for tourists and children to be educated. At present the garden is also diverse various managements including Bar-Be-Q area, campsite, reference room, vacation wanigans and the field-art museum.

Answer 1

Tzuchi TempleThe temple is located at No. 179 Jhongjheng Rd., Fongyuan City, Taichung County which the square measure of the base is 887 pings and the square measure of the building is 300 pings. It was built in 1806 and had more than 170 years. The main Ethereal is Matzu. The temple is very huge and full with the original decoration and art of architectures. There are many devotees worshiping there everyday. The temple has become a religious and tour center. It contained the oldest art of stones sculptures.Jhongjheng ParkJhongjheng Park, a leisure place for people in Fongyuan, is located on Shueiyuan Rd., Fongyuan City. There is a valley in the front and mountains on the back. The shade of coconut palm and banyan are planted by the beautiful bent paths in the park, which is suitable for people to take a walk in the summer. There is a pavilion in the front of the park. The bronze statue of Chian Kai-chek is beside the pavilion. The park also offers various facilities including swimming pool and game areas for children and parents.Kunlauping Fruit-tour GardenKunlauping Fruit-tour Garden is located between Fungyuan Stadium and Jhongjheng Park. It is the biggest fruit-tour garden in central Taiwan with 10 hectare. There are more than one hundred species of fruit trees, which are available for tourists. There are various kinds of fruit trees like Capri figs and four-season fruit. The narrators explain the plant ecology to the tourists and children. At present the garden is divided into several sections such as the bar-B-Q areas, the camping areas, reference rooms, resort cabins and a field art museum.

2006-03-20 22:27:34 補充：
謝謝採用

Answer 2

不好意思，我無法幫妳看完這部分，但我可以確定，"果園"這東西叫做Garden就行，其他都是多餘的。
美國的觀光果園都是Garden，要註明是給觀光客去的，只要說有什麼活動就行，例如apple-picking。
其他還有Ranch（牧場），Farm（農場）即使是觀光用途，前面也不需加字，要加的只有主人的名字。

這些我都去過許多個，可以肯定。

Answer 3

Tzuchi Temple
The temple is located at No. 179 Jhongjheng Rd., Fongyuan City, Taichung County which is 887 square meters totally and 300 square meters of building. It is built at 1806 and had more than 170 years history. The main Ethereal is Matzu. The temple is very huge and full of the original decoration and art of architectures. There are a lot of devotees everyday. The temple becomes the religious and tourist center. It contained the oldest art of carven sculptures

Jhongjheng Park
Jhongjheng Park that is the leisure place of Fongyuan people is located at the Shueiyuan Rd., Fongyuan City. The front and back of the park are valley and massif. The shade of coconut palms and banyans are planted by the beautiful bent sideways in the park, which is very suitable for a walk in the summer. The pavilion is settled in the front of the park. Beside the pavilion is the bronze statue of Chian Kai-chek. The park also offers various facilities including a swimming pool and game places for children and parents.

Kunlauping tourist garden
Kunlauping tourist garden is located between Fungyuan stadium and Jhongjheng park. The biggest tourist garden in the middle Taiwan contains 10 hectares. There are more than one hundred species of fruit trees, which are available for visitors. Capri figs and various fruit are planted there. Tourists and children will also gain a lot of knowledge of them while visiting. There are also many diverse and various services including the barbecue area, campsites, reference rooms, vacation log cabins and the field-art museum.

2006-03-20 17:03:10 補充：
還有田園藝術館翻 Field-art museum好像怪怪的

Answer 4

好厲害喔~
一點都沒錯ㄋ~
加油 加油喔~
不過是不是我看錯ㄌㄚ
好像有點怪怪ㄉㄋ