幫我檢查文法對不對.......

Question

There is a lot of pollution in Macau, including air, noise, water pollution.Concerning this problem, we have done an report on it.

Pollution is everywhere in Macau. We need to pay more attention to it.

How does the air pollution affect us?

Pile drivers and cars are the main causer of air pollution.

They have made lots of exhaust fume.
這裏要用現在式還是現在完成??
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幫我看看句子的文法對不對........

是幫我看全部的句子的文法哦...不是只看一句!!

Answer 1

原文: There is a lot of pollution in Macau, including air, noise, water pollution. Concerning this problem, we have done an report on it.修改: There are many kind of pollution in Macau, including air, noise, and water pollution. Concerning this problem, we have provided a report about it.重寫: Macau is under the exposure of air, noise, and water pollutions. In regard to this problem, we have provided a report to analyze those issues.註解: 你這段是以現在式的寫法, 時性沒有錯誤. 所以之後的文章,除非有特別的情況,不然寫法應該是以現在式來寫. "We have provided" 的寫法是現在完成式. 而其它文法上的錯誤已用顏色標明.原文: Pollution is everywhere in Macau. We need to pay more attention to it.修改: (No error)註解: 你這段是以現在式的寫法. 沒有錯誤.原文: How does the air pollution affect us?修改: (No error)註解: 你這段是以現在式的寫法. 沒有錯誤.原文: Pile drivers and cars are the main causer of air pollution. They have made lots of exhaust fume.修改: (No error)重寫: Massive vehicles not passing the smog check regulation are the major cause for air pollution.註解: 文法沒有錯誤,行式為現在式.不過整篇文章好像才剛開始而已,還沒有一個主題. 你只是繞著"澳門的污染很嚴重"一直改寫.

Answer 2

要用現在式，還有文法是對的，知道嗎?

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